The fall

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"Come on Kris, you're walking too slow!" Susie yelled down the path. Kris and Susie were climbing a mountain, Susie was way ahead of Kris. Kris started to run up the hill and then very quickly ran out of breath. " haha! iv'e got a real nice view up here, too bad you can't see it!" Susie laughed, it was very menacing.

Very suddenly Kris heard Susie scream, they looked up and saw that Susie was gone. Kris started running very fast up the hill until they reached a really big hole in the mountain, it must have been miles long! looked like it narrowed at the end. They didn't know if they should jump down or not. as they were debating the ground under them started to crumble. "I should have been paying attention to that" Kris thought. They fell forward, it seemed to be a long fall but they started to be able to see the bottom, or what they thought was the bottom, before they could reached it, their vision went blurry. They had passed out.

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