Mel's pov
"Hunter, Hunter where are you" I shout for my son's name but no reply.
"Mum,Mum it's Ray he's calling me" my daughter Sadie says with a worried expression on her face.
"Listen to me now and I will tell you guys what you're going to do get me my money and the gun or you will never see your son or brother ever again,understood? Ray voices.Me and Sadie run as fast as we can into the car I have the money and gun securely in my bag then we head of to the woods to find Ray and Hunter.
Sadie's pov
Once, me and mum arrive in the woods we get out seeing Ray standing there waiting for us with a gleeful smile on his face. "Have you got it" Ray demands
"Yes we have now tell me where my son is" Mel remands from Ray as he continues "Well I can't tell you that find him yourself". That's when I grabbed the gun out of mum's hand and point it at Ray.
"You think that your clever yeah well you're not you are just a big,fat bigamist with no life" I shout.Ray then starts running at me I freeze and mum goes off to find Hunter I shoot the bullet at a tree and tell Ray to lie on the floor he does.Then, I slowly walk backwards still pointing the gun at him. Mum and Hunter arrive
"Where's Ray" mum question me.l
"On the floor" I answer laughing, both Mel and Hunter glare at me and I stop laughing.
Hunter's pov
Me,mum and Sadie all run back to the car
"COME ON START THE CAR, HURRY UP!"I shout at mum.
"I'm trying alright keep your hair on!" Mum shouts back at me.Ray suddenly appears at the window we all scream then he gets a shovel and starts beating the wheel flattening them so we can't escape then he goes round the back of the boot Mum eventually starts the car but it moves backwards running Ray over she moves the car forward hitting a tree. "Wait, here both of you" then mum exits. Of course, we follow her
"Is he dead" I asks
"I think so he I can't feel any pulse" mum says crying.
"Why you crying for he conned you and put you through hell"
I'll go bury him" Mum then leaves carrying Ray's body with her. We hear a scream mum's she is in danger. "Come on we got to go save her now, now" I mention to Sadie. We run I'm ahead of Sadie who isn't even that close behind I can't wait for her cos then I will fear the worst....I see Ray strangling mum and I see the gun and shoot him with it and he falls on mum RAY IS NOW DEAD............................
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Eastenders-Saddie Owen
FanfictionSaddie Owen is the daughter of Steve and Mel Owen and the older sister of Hunter Owen. Her dad died when she was young and looked up to her mother's fiancée Ray Kelly who isn't as he seems. She is a very kind girl and would always help people out. H...
