RANT AHEAD.. YOU'VE BEEN ADVISED, THOUGH PLEASE READ, ITS EXPLATION
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So let me go ahead and set some things straight. One, things I've done have either no business even being included, or just throw things off or just become unnecessary becomes of already known reasons, ie; including espers into the world. I will be honest, don't know where that came from. I get ideas that I just put in but its only after its posted that for some reason I really look back on and realize it was just pointless
Two, the personality. Feel like I should have made more things sensible instead of just saying, "mc with Accelerator personality" as all of you can tell, that sure as shit isn't the case, more along the lines of there's some of it there, but most of it is just different then Accelerator. Should have definitely described it more as "mc with a touch of Accelerator's personality"
Finally, pacing, oh boy is this awful. I can't pace things well, sure that's very obvious from what you've seen so far. I don't flesh things out, I 'tell' the story instead of 'showing' it. Yeah I really just fucked up with that and I understand. Thing is.. I don't know how to flesh things out and go slow. Its stupid I know, but in my mind, fleshing things out doesn't really.. work?
Well that's not really it I think but its as close as I can make of it to being sensible. I don't know how to flesh things out, going slow is something I understand makes fics better, actually any novel for that matter, but for me? No clue, nada, zilch. Hell I don't think I, at any point in this ultimately cringe fic, I've ever even given like some wording on fucking background, like a little 'outside view' or something.
I'm young, I'm learning, hopefully.. Honestly I think if I could get down pacing and fleshing things out I could definitely be better but again, no clue on how to do that. God I'm a fucking idiot.
That being said, I think we can all agree this should just end soon right? Good, I'm assuming you agree with me on this since this is honestly pretty trash, better than what I had done on wattpad like last year though so hey. Little improvement. God I'm dying of cringe thinking of my writing on there and this fic, also on my other fic, god none of the shit I do makes sense! Its all just wish fulfillment isn't it!?
But yeah this should end soon, maybe like right now. This shit was short but I think we can all agree we let this shit die and never look back on it again.
Rant over, sorry for all that but, felt like I had to say it. Let the aforementioned cringe continue!
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Staring down the bald man in the suit who looked like he'd croak over in a few seconds with how fucked his face was
"So Accelerator you wanna fight this guy?" Kakine asked as he looked at 'The One'
"Why should I? He's nothing but a speck of dust to me, just like all of those hero's dead in that stadium, though not like there's any part of them left after my attack. Why don't you two go ahead and fight him"
"Oh yeah? Well then why should we? He's here for YOU not US, so why should we fight YOUR enemy?" Mikoto spoke to me with a smug grin on her face, believing she had won
"Yeah? Well would you look at that, your logic makes sense"
"Don't act like you know my logic.." She spoke in fake anger, obviously amused by the supposed 'Nightmare of Japan' watching our exchange go on without any visible expression since, you know, no face and all. But I was sure, the guy was angry if not at least annoyed
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The Strongest of Japan: Accelerator
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