I'm just gonna say it I'm going to be(partially) rewriting this story. where did this come from? Well I've been busy lately with school and other family stuff and haven't had enough time to do much writing here, I started taking a fantasy writing class as well as watching videos about short stories etc. But I thought I'd hop on Wattpad for a bit(where I was bombarded with a shit ton of notifications) and I came back to this, I decided to kinda re-read it for fun and while doing so I can't really help but notice the sloppy storyline and I was kind of thinking about changing the story and character(sorta). I like Rayla but I feel like I made her too trusting of pierce all because she likes him, and I feel like it's one of those cringy stories like "oh he's hot so I'll give him my trust" now I could be wrong and people might like this(in some far away universe 😂) but then there's that part of me that doesn't want to change the story at all, keep this and write another M.I.D book.
Soooo I'm kinda half and half right now, i went ahead and did redesign Rayla's wolf form and it had changed a LOT she's not even purple anymore. Im going to slightly rewrite the chapters although the only change would be raylas personality, I would make her more protective of Ava, she would acknowledge pierce but wouldn't really let him close to ava. I'm gonna do my best to make it kind of a slow-burn but I'm not really good with that so hopefully I'll do it right 👀 Soooo yeah if you kinda ignore this(which is completely fine you don't have to read it) you might be confused by the next chapter.
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Moonlit howl(MID pierce x halfblood oc)(on hiatus)
FanfictionRayla is Ava's werewolf half-blood adopted sister she had a rough past and doesn't give that information To just anyone Ava's dads found her hurt in a back alleyway when she was around 8 and they've raised her ever since she lives with ava in her ap...
