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[KATHERINE] Chances at Love

Book name - Chances At Love 

Author's name - stopperbuns 

Genre - Romance

Book title - 5/5: I love the title. It is unique and actually resonates with the story.

Book cover- 7/10: The current book cover is not bad, but I think it could be made better. Right now, it seems a bit too plain and common. 

Description - 9/10: The description is wonderful and I was definitely able to see a glimpse of what the story is about. It is also intriguing and makes me want to read the story because of the unique theme.

First chapter - 5/5: The first chapter is beautifully written. As soon as I started reading it, I was completely immersed into reading the book. 

Flow and Organization -10/10: The story is very well thought out and is written in a very structured manner. There is no interruption during the narration of the story, which keeps the reader completely immersed in the story.

Characters - 10/10: I fell in love with the main character in the first chapter itself because of how much I could resonate with the character. The other characters have also been introduced well and are described in great detail, which is very enthralling for the reader. I also love how you introduced the characters in the separate chapter along with their aesthetics which gave the reader a basic idea of every character. 

Grammar and Vocabulary - 13.5/15: The grammar and vocabulary used in the book is very good. I didn't find any major mistakes in the grammar per se, just a few minor mistakes which can easily be changed.

Originality - 9.5/10: The story is very fascinating and one of a kind. The way the author has created anticipation of progress of the main characters in the story is very riveting. 

Plot development - 15/15: The plot develops in a very tantalizing manner. I was completely engrossed in reading the story because of how well the plot develops. The way the story unfolds in the beginning is truly amazing and I love it!

Hook - 10/10: I was completely hooked onto the story the minute I started reading it! It is indeed a very beautifully written story so far and I look forward to reading more of the story!  

Total score - 94/100 

Author's strength - The author's strength is definitely writing stories that touch your heart and hit close to home. I would say that writing in general is her strength. Your writing is very beautiful and I really love how you've written your story ♡︎

Scope for improvement - I think the cover could be made better and more lively that would capture a reader's interest instantly. I also think that adding a little bit of what the character was initially in the description would make the description perfect. There are a few grammar errors in the prologue and the description which can be improved.

Advice for improvement -For covers, as I have mentioned before, there are a lot of writers on Wattpad who make very beautiful covers. So you could order a cover from them or if you want to make the covers yourself, you could use applications like Picsart, Canva, etc. 

 The grammatical errors are something you can read and fix. There was one in the prologue that I think needs improvement is: 

In the last line you've written, 

"Does there are really chances at love?" 

It is written in incorrect grammar and can be written as, 

"Do they have any chances at love?" 

There was another one in the description where you've written, 

"Was everything this beautiful always, Was I just blind?" 

It should be written as, 

"Was everything always this beautiful? How was I so blind?"