《𝐆𝐨𝐨𝐝𝐛𝐲𝐞 𝐎𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞 𝐓𝐨𝐰𝐧》

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Little Mistake in Chapter One, English isn't my first language, and after a re-read of previous chapters, I realized I mistook brother and best-friend when referring to Laxus. I have since fixed it but figured I should clear it up for those who've already read through previous chapters.

Sorry, chapters late, I've recently moved over-seas for school, and it took some time to get everything settled, but my new English friend is reading through further chapters for me, so my English should be more natural? She said my casual writing tone sounded like professional essays, and I didn't have to use such big words.

But anyway please, Enjoy!

✩░▒▓▆▅▃▂▁ 𝑪𝒉𝒂𝒑𝒕𝒆𝒓 𝑺𝒕𝒂𝒓𝒕!▁▂▃▅▆▓▒░✩

"And now the town is rubble."

While they were busy robbing Buggy blind, Luffy got a little out of control, and the two girls just stared at the disaster surrounding them. The little bit of town that remained was blown to bits, with small bits of rubble covering the still unconsious Zoro. The scene in front of them now looked like a standoff, the two pirate captains stared at each other dramatically.

Nami took this chance to grab Mirajane's free hand, dragging her away. "All right, Mira, help me get this treasure to my ship." Nami grabbed her bag and began walking away.

Nami moved quickly to leave the mess behind as far as she was concerned she was getting her treasure out of there. The last thing they needed was Buggy taking back the gold they had acquired, so Mira could not really blame her. That being said, it is not as though they would agree to it. Why would they allow him to keep the money they worked so hard to steal? If he notices them at all, they were sneaky as they took off for the harbor.

With the enormous bags of gold they were transporting, it was obvious how cunning they were—please note the irony. It's not as if they were making more noise than an elephant, as they side-stepped rubble, and stepped over Buggy's fallen crewmembers.

Why else would two dismembered hands appear to stop them? Seems there 'sneaky' escape wasn't so sneaky after all. Especially since he noticed them even whilst in a fight. Buggy grinned before turning to face the two girls.

"Did you really think I would let you get away with my gol-?" Buggy's sudden intervention was cut short by Luffy's punch.

It is his fault, really; never allow yourself to be distracted, even if the distractions are appealing.

Nami's words, not mine.

Regardless the fight involved the girls too. Or at the very least, Mira, and she was itching for some action. Her fight - actually no - the one-sided beat down that was Mohji earlier, left her craving a decent battle. Or atleast someone who couldn't be one shot.

A disdain for large cat people is brewing.

Mira stood aside for a bit watching the 'fight' between Luffy and Buggy, occasionally butting in when Nami was targeted. Not exactly the 'fight' she was hoping for, but she knew Luffy would be upset if she butted in especially after the low blow Buggy just made.

Mirajane watched as bits of straw fluttered about, Buggy's' dagger filled hand grazed the edge of Luffy's hat briefly reminding the two of the promise he and Shanks had made. Mirajane was angry herself over this, she couldn't imagine just how pissed Luffy was.

"That does it!" Luffy grabbed hold of the hat from a top his head in anger, "You nicked my hat! This is precious to me you know!" Luffy's tone towards the battle changed to that of anger.  Luffy had promised to become a great pirate over the straw hat, he had no plans on letting it be ruined before he returned it to Shanks. 

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