Water Fall

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Authors Note: this one really concerned me. like what on earth just happened. 


...He looked down.

There was a massive water fall. 

A strange mist hung all around. 

His hands were sweaty and aching. 

He slipped.

He fell.

Everything went black. 

This is what it felt like to die, he thought. 

He opened his eyes. 

And saw eight eyes.

The acromantula charged. 

Dobby was riding on it's back. 

His leg was hanging by a thread.

He was lying in the waist-deep water. 

He realised the situation. 

He hopped backwards a little. 

Big mistake. 


He fell into the deep water. 

There was a drop.

He opened his aching eyes. 

He was sinking. 

Down, Down, Down...

Then he saw the grind lows grabbing him.

He punched them all  away, and used his arms to swim to the surface.

He met Dobby at the top. 

Dobby pointed his ugly index finger at him!

BOOP!


He woke up. 

He was lying on the hard, damp, ground of the cave. 

He felt dizzy.

The end. 

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