Round 1 Results: Action/Adventure and Thriller/Suspense

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Thank you so much for participating in the awards

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Thank you so much for participating in the awards. The entries all had something truly unique or special about them. However, there can only be one winner and just like a good steak, our judges must trim the fat.

Below, are the first round results for Action/Adventure and Thriller/Suspense.

Good luck to those continuing and thank you for your efforts to those who didn't make it through.

Judged by Mariya_Evans and craftychicken

ENTRIES NOT GOING THROUGH:

The Rise of The Deadly Viper by diamondgiirrl
Judged by craftychicken
Title 4/5 The title doesn't make too much sense yet, but I do like it.
Cover 3/5 I don't personally enjoy real people on book covers.
Blurb 6/10 The blurb is too long and there are a few mistakes throughout.
Hook 8/10 Overall, I'm actually pretty intrigued.
Total 21/30 I do like your writing however there are a few grammar mistakes throughout which can take you out of the story. I like the plot so far though.

ZuoMeng: To Dream by SereinChoo
Judged by craftychicken
Title 3/5 I don't really like the title very much.
Cover 4/5 The cover is ok in my opinion but it could be better.
Blurb 7/10 The blurb is ok, but not extremely captivating.
Hook 7/10 Not incredibly intriguing but I am intrigued enough to continue.
Total 21/30 I like how this is inspired by Chinese folklore. It reminds me a little of Mulan.

Treasure of Summer by lana_com
Judged by craftychicken
Title 5/5 I love this title a lot.
Cover 2/5 The cover does not do this justice. I'd recommend looking into getting a new one.
Blurb 7/10 The blurb is ok. It's not overly captivating.
Hook 6/10 l'm sorry to say that I am not incredibly interested. Sorry.
Total 20/30 l'm so sorry that I didn't enjoy this more. I don't really know why but I just didn't click with the story.

Scandalous by chocxlatelover
Judged by Mariya_Evans
Title: 4.5/5
Cover: 4.5/5
Blurb: 7/10
Hook: 6/10
Total: 22/30

The title goes well with the content of the book—which is scandalous indeed. It's short and sweet, and is easy for the reader to remember. The only issue here is that it's a common title, and there are several other books on Wattpad with the same name. The cover of this book is nicely done. The color scheme is dark, which is very appropriate for the contents of the book. The red lettering on the front adds a chilling feel, and the addition of the main character in her dark lipstick is also helpful for the reader. The chalk outline and caution tape at the bottom of the cover also give the reader a hint of what sort of book they are about to open. Nicely done.

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