"..." "...?" "...Well, it's about what I expected from someone like you." "That's a little blunt..." "Well, excuse me. It's not like I said it was bad. It just didn't evoke any emotions." "So basically, it's not cute enough for your tastes?" "Do you want to get smacked?" "I'll pass..." "Sigh... Well anyway, I guess I need to so you mine. Not that you'll like it."
Eagles Can Fly
Monkeys can climb
Crickets can leap
Horses can race
Owls can seek
Cheetahs can run
Eagles can fly
People can try
But that's about it.
"Yeah... I told you that you weren't gonna like it." "I like it." "What? Just be honest!" "I am. Why are you so convinced that I wouldn't like it?"
" Well- Because! Everyone in high school thinks that writing has to be all sophisticated and stuff... So people don't even take my writing seriously." "But isn't the point of poems for people to express themselves? Your writing style wouldn't make you message any less valid." "Yes! Exactly! I like when it's easy to read, but it hits you hard. Like in this poem. Seeing everyone around you do great things to be really disheartening... So I decided to write about it." "Yeah, I understand." "But the other nice thing about simple writing is thag it puts more weight on the wordplay. Like I set up for a rhyme at the end, but then made it fall flat on purpose. It helps bring out the feeling in the last line." "So you did... I guess more went into it than I realized." "That's what it means to be a pro! I'm glad you learned something. Didn't expect that from someone younger than you, now did you?" "Yeah...guess not." I decide to humor him with that last comment. I don't really care how old everyone is, but if Z is feeling proud then I won't take that away from him.
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Who should I show my poem to next?
Taeyoung💓>
Jesse💙
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4town DDLC Au Rewrite | Some changes DISCONTINUED
Fanfictionthe only change is Robaire is mc while Z is Natsuki, everything else is the same.
