𝖯𝖺𝗉𝖾𝗋 𝖱𝗂𝗇𝗀𝗌

q&a

q&a kinda?

So there are soo many things I don't like about this book and so many plot holes. So I'm here to talk about them.

1. "Why didn't you talked about Neve's trauma more and only focused on Zaiah's trauma?"

Well, my very dear readers, I didn't have time. When I first started this book, I had a whole different idea and different back-stories and definitely more chapters. I didn't know I will end this book this early so I focused more on Zaiah's trauma thinking I'll have more chapters to talk about Neve's trauma. But I tried to include it in the last chapters and I know it's rushed but I tried my best. (i'll talk about it in her children's books)

2. "Why did you even add Lilah or whatever her name is? We only see her twice."

Again, I had different plans for this book. Lilah was supposed to give birth, neve and zaiah would have a fight but would have to go together at her nieces baptism and zaiah would realise he's in love with neve.

3. "Why didn't they fight?"

Because I don't know how to make a man grovel, ok? Blame in on my dad because he always expects to forgive him without him even show me he's sorry and I have to forgive him so he won't start another fight. So, thank you dad. Thank you very much.

4. "Why did they fell in love so fast?"

Can't write a slow burn. Nope. I'll try in my future's books but I don't promise anything. And I don't know how to describe feelings because I've never been in love and I'm scared I will never be because I'm pretty sure I can't feel anything. Like I don't feel like I love my mom, I just know I have to so I just say I do but I'm not—

Anyway

5. "What the fuck was even this horrible, the most disgusting, ickyest (is this even a word?), craziest book?

I. don't.know.

I can't think of any others question so just let me in the comments if you want to know something.

Now let's talk about my future books 'cause I have shit ton of ideas. I'm going to write them down so just chose one (or more) :

1. title: untitled
summary: so it's about kali stolly (yes, her daughter) and this guy flynn. They meet at a party, Flynn wants to be friends and love starts from there.
trope/s: reversed grumpy x sunsine, slow burn (i'll try), he fell first & he fell harder, shy girl x popular guy, black cat x golden retriever

2. title: why does ronan hates the color pink?
summary: there is this girl that everybody loves. The sunshine in person, an angel on earth. But there is this person that just simply doesn't like her. He hates her and she is ready to find out why.
trope/s: sunshine x grumpy, popular girl x unknown guy, rich girl x poor guy

3: title: untiled
summary: she is doing the "exchanged school" program and she accidentally gets switched with another girl. So she ends up in a private (very rich) boarding school where every single person is a jackass to her but especially this hot dude that speaks only in quotes and has a weird obsession with her hair color.
trope/s: good girl x bad boy, private school, rich guy x poor girl, he fell first x he fell harder, he's absolutely obsessed with everything she does (he literally kissed the earth she walked on) (is this even a trope?). (seems really cool to write)

4: title: untitled
summary: another sunshine girl. good heart, great humor, perfectly stupid red hair. Her only flaw? Her parents. Horrible people. Jail. So she works at a cafe shop and she meets another red head and they become friends. He invites her to his car race and she meets his friend. An asshole. But a breathtaking asshole. You know the story.
trope/s: sunshine x grumpy (yes, again. shut up), he saves her from her abusive family, sun x moon, talks a lot x listens

5: title: untitled
summary: in a world where rich and poor people grew apart, this stupid girl wants to stop this system so she finds herself a job as a maid for the richest guy there but finds out dark secrets. Darker then this dudes personality.
trope/s: enemies to lovers, dystopia (???), I would kill every on that dares to touch you,strong female lead (it's something new so I kinda want to try this out)

6: title: untitled
summary: she is ill and she hasn't long to live so she decides to live her life at the fullest. And as she is at a party, the mean girl starts being interested in her.
trope/s: mean girl x unknown girl, sunshine x grumpy, talks a lot x listens, would die for each other

7: title: untiled
summary: mafia took over her town so she isn't aloud to go out. But she sneaks out and meets this mysterious dude with white hair.
trope/s: good girl x dangerous man (like girl, run!), found family, "the fireworks are pretty, aren't they?" while he looks directly at her, "yes, yes they are."

8: title: untitled
summary: she's a nobody and he's the popular bad boy. her mother works at his family so they meet each other very often and they start talking to each other.
trope/s: good girl x bad boy, not so rich girl x very rich guy, she's the only person he cares about, adorable little sister (again, is this a trope?), twin flames, sad girl x sad boy
(tbh, I'm pretty excited to write this book)

this is pretty much everything. i probably have more but I forgotten them. please let me know!

the bonus chapters are coming!!!!