Onerous [Lookism Fanfic]

Chapter 5: Nine's live commentary.

The scene where Park Daniel held Park Seo-Jun's hands:

[Waaaaah! What should we do? What should we do? Daniel Park might see your scars the kind butler had covered with care!]

"Calm down Nine, he won't."

[If he saw, then Nine will! Nine will! Erase his memories and drop him back to the school gates!]

"You can't do that to the game protagonist, Nine."

[Waaaah! I don't want everyone to hate Park Seo-Jin just because of his scars! Waaaaaa!]

"Nine... just calm down. Look, he didn't notice right?"

[T-that was close... T^T]

"Silly, just trust me."

[I love the head (screen?) pats from Park Seo-Jun! And I don't care about your scars!]

"Thanks Nine."

When Park Seo-Jun arrived first in their classroom:

[Player Park Seo-Jun! The protagonist is here again!]

"Where?"

[Behind you!]

"I see."

[He looked like a frozen tomato right now! Nine thinks he doesn't want to go here? WHY? DID HE FIGURE OUT YOUR SCARS!? Don't worry about him! Nine will take care of him! Leave him to me!]

"Nine, wait. Don't do anything to him. I'm sure he didn't know about my scars."

[Then why isn't he walking here?]

"Hmmm, probably because he's embarrassed?"

[Embarrassed? Why? Because he held your hand?]

"Probably."

[Hmm, I'm not convinced! I'll keep an eye on him! If he hurts Player Park Seo-Jun, Nine will not forgive him!]

After Park Seo-Jun introduced himself, Nine is talking to itself:

[Yay! Everyone likes Player Park Seo-Jun! Finally! Everyone can see what Nine sees in him!]

[The game protagonist is getting weirder and weirder! Should I tell Player Park Seo-Jun?]

[Why does he keep on looking at Player Park Seo-Jun, but when Player Park Seo-Jun looked at him, he immediately looked away? He's so weird!]

[Hmm? This guy, Jay Hong, is looking at Player Park Seo-Jun so intently! Is he trying to pick a fight with Player Park Seo-Jun!? No wait! Nine cannot sense hostility from him! Did he figure Player Park Seo-Jun's identity?]

[Nine is scared! Nine cannot understand other people besides Player Park Seo-Jun after all!]

[Hmm? Why is this Jay Hong looking outside after Park Seo-Jun's introduction? Does he hate him now? But why is he stealing glances at Player Park Seo-Jun?]

[Nine is still lacking as a system to assist Player Park Seo-Jun. :(( ]

[Nine decides to observe more and learn!]

[Nine will protect Player Park Seo-Jun from the meanies!]

(A/N:) Hello everyone! Thank you for waiting!!!!! As for the result of my defense, it's :((. I'm so sad and the revision is still ongoing T^T. I want to cry like really T^T.

Anyways, I have written 2 reserve chapters, so I can update twice but not everyday. I can't promise a fast update, so I hope you can wait for me.