It's not fair | Ennard x [Neu] Reader

Advice

Okay so, first off, I am soso sorry about forgetting this story again. I got taken off my ADHD meds and was busy with Drivers ED, an oil leak in my car, and almost getting struck by lightning- which has taken a lot of effort to work through so I can drive again.

The next chapter is currently halfway done- starting off with Scott for all of you phone guy lovers. I currently have it in a draft as we speak, and expect to hopefully finish it within the next hour.

HOWEVER

I know I am not the best writer. I don't mean this in a pity-me "Oh I suck at everything 🥺" way, I mean this in an inexperienced way. I have been writing since I was in 5th grade (I am currently in 12th), but have only completed one book out of the multiple I started, ditched after a chapter or two, or got a bit in then suddenly killed off an immortal character to finish it (targeted at my "the different one" book up for everyone to read if they need to bully someone- please leave hate comments if you do they're so funny to read)

I ask for a score, how you think my writing skill is. Be honest please, I'm looking to improve, not take compliments. As well as, if you have any, I'd like some feedback too.

-Whatre some things that annoy you about books? (+ make you stop reading)
-Whatre some ways you think I could improve my writing?
-What're some things you wish were in books more?
-Whatre some of your favorite aspects of books? (Ex: neutral reader- no "she" or "he" or "long flowy blonde straight hair with bright blue eyes" on a Y/N book, different POVs, etc)

*THESE ARE ALL OPTIONAL. YOU ARE NOT REQUIRED TO ANSWER THESE, AND MAY SKIP TO THE NEXT CHAPTER ONCE PUBLISHED.