Reviewer:Dull_candle_
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Story Details:
Title: A Summoner's Story
Status: ongoing
Chapters:3
Genre: Fanfiction (Kingdom hearts)
Author:SnowWhite249172
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𝗦𝘂𝗺𝗺𝗮𝗿𝘆
Aqua, Terra, and Ventus, also known as the Wayfinder group, are skilled wielders of the keyblade. They have dedicated themselves to safeguarding the light from the encroaching darkness, much like summoners, albeit utilizing different methods
However, fifty years ago, a fearsome creature known as Sin devastated a large portion of the summoner population while they bravely attempted to thwart its destructive path. The mighty summoner Braska managed to seal the creature, but there exists one individual who possesses the ability to break the seal, yet remains unaware of her extraordinary power.
With the remaining summoners falling victim to unknown assailants, the son of Braska approached Eraqus, the esteemed master of the Wayfinder group. He implored Eraqus to protect his daughter, Senna, as he foresaw an impending tragedy that would befall him and others .
Leaving behind her own painful past and the sorrow of losing her parents, Senna embarks on a journey to a grand and unfamiliar castle that stands before her. It is a place where she shall encounter complete strangers who are likely to play a significant role in her future.
The journey that started with pain will lead her to falling in love with an unexpected person or will it lead to more devastation?
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𝐎𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰
🌸. The title of the story is accurate and suits the overall vibe of the book. It clearly shows what the story is going to be about.
🌸. I would suggest that the description be a bit longer, as I didn't get much of an idea about the book after reading it.
🌸. The book cover isn't very appealing. The title of the book is not present on it, so I would suggest making some changes to it. As someone who knows nothing about Kingdom Hearts, the cover didn't give me any idea about the book.
🌸. I love how the story is paced smoothly and doesn't rush through events. This allows readers to understand the emotions of the characters better.
🌸. Writing long chapters can be risky, as you don't want readers to get bored. However, you did an amazing job with your chapters. They were long, but never boring, and made me want to read more of your story.
🌸. I wouldn't suggest any changes to your writing style, as it is perfect. Your characters are well-written, your choice of words is great, and the way you describe the magic and the lack of grammatical mistakes show how hard you have worked on your book.
🌸. The plot twists in the story are unexpected and keep readers on their toes. This element of surprise adds excitement to the overall reading experience. You have done a great job maintaining suspense and keeping readers engaged.
🌸. The dialogue in the story is natural and flows smoothly. It helps bring out the personalities and relationships of the characters. The conversations are engaging and realistic, making the story feel authentic.
🌸. Overall, the story is captivating and well-written. The engaging plot makes it a highly enjoyable read. I look forward to reading more from a talented author like you.
Thankyou for giving me a chance to write a review on your story.And I hope your story gains the recognition it deserves.Best of luck(◍•ᴗ•◍)
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