Certainly! Here's a revised version:
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It didn't take long until they arrived at Chan's place. Felix gazed out of the car window, surprised by the grandeur of Chan's house. After they got out of the car, Felix spoke up.
Felix: "Hyung, are you some kind of prince or something?"
Chan chuckled in response, "Hahaha, no, it's just that my parents are incredibly wealthy."
Felix: "Bruh, I think your family could buy mine."
*Chan's thought: Is it legal?*
Chan: "Hahaha."
Felix: "If they buy my family, do I become a 'bang'?"
*Chan's thought: You can become in another way, cutie.*
Chan: "Maybe, we'll see. Why don't we go in?"
Felix: "Okay."
Chan and Felix entered the house and were greeted by people dancing, drinking, and making out. They spotted their friends and joined them.
Felix: "Hey, guys!"
Everyone: "Hey!"
Chan: "Are you guys having fun?"
Lino: "Yeah, and wow, Chan, I knew you were rich, but I didn't realize it was this much."
Chan: "Well, I'm not the only one who's rich, you know."
Han: "I am rich, but not as rich as you, young master. Hehe."
Changbin: "For real."
Seungmin: "So, you guys are friends because your parents are all rich, or...?"
I.N: "Yes and no. Mine, Changbin's, and Han's parents work for Chan's parents and they're friends, so we grew up together."
L, F, S, H: "Ohh."
Hyunjin: "That makes sense, I think, just like us."
Felix: "Hey, Hyunjin, did you bring a date?"
Hyunjin: "Well, actually, since Lino and Seungmin have their date, me and Changbin were the third wheel, so we decided to go together."
Felix: "So, everyone here has a date."
Hyunjin: "Wait, you too...?!"
Felix: "Yeah, Chan is my date."
Seungmin, Hyunjin: "How? When?"
Chan: "Hmm, it's a long story. Why don't we go dance, guys?"
Everyone: "Yeah!"
They all started dancing with their dates, having fun. Eventually, a slow dance began. Felix and Chan hugged while dancing, feeling like they were meant to be together. As they looked into each other's eyes, they moved closer until their lips met. Both felt fireworks and didn't want to stop. But then...
Chan: "Felix, you smell so good."
Suddenly, Felix's legs gave out, and Chan caught him. Felix chuckled nervously and said, "Ha, Chan, I think I'm in heat"
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Different Soulmate>Chanlix<
RomanceThis story is about a bunny and a wolf and ther insoluble love Smut warning il put this in the title 🔞 Side ships: Hyunchang Seungjeon Minsung Started-29/07/2022 End-procesing