Mysterious man?

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Authors note: I need you to help me decide on a name for this chapter, let me know I'll pick the best one. Thanks.

"What happens now?" Asked Nancy.

"Well I will have two detectives wait at closing time to see if Kilma leaves the building then we will take it from there, unfortunately we can't do much more at this point. We need to stick to the instructions for now so we don't make any mistakes." Stated the officer.

"And what if Kilma doesn't leave the building? What if he isn't even in there and he's somewhere with my daughter?" Said Nancy with worry in her eyes.

"We will return to your home and try to connect a call with who you called from the note and see if we can find anything else out." Said the officer.

After a silent worrying journey back to Nancy's house they got inside and sat in the kitchen next to the phone.

"Now Nancy, what we need you to do is stay very calm and ask simple and short questions regarding your daughter, the main thing we're trying to do is keep him on the phone as long as we can do we can track him number." The officer made clear.

Nancy stood and took a deep breath, she picked up the phone and dialed the number again, the officers reassure her as she waits for them to pick up.

"Hello..." Said the same huskey foreign voice from last time.

"Hi, I went to the laundrette and I was told Kilma isn't aaccessible" panicked Nancy.

"Tell them Darki sent you, don't call again goodbye" the man instructed.

"No, wai...." The phone cut off.

"It wasn't long enough was it officer?" Asked Nancy.

"No not quite but he have another name, let's go back to the laundrette and say Darki sent us requested the officer.

They went to the car and set off back to the laundrette.

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"DAD!!!" Yelled Hannah.
"Where am I?!!!" She shouted.
"Somebody help me" she pleaded.

A small door creeked open slowly.

"Please don't hurt me" Hannah screamed desperately.

A tall dark figure starts to walk towards her, Hannah tries to see if it is her dad, as the figure got closer Hannah tried to figure out his facial figures but it seemed to be covered by a purple patterned balaclava. He gad a mucky dark skin and was carrying a red box that rattled with metal objects.
He sits the box down on the table next to the wooden bed Hannah had been chained to.

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING? PLEASE DON'T HURT ME PLEEAASEE!!!" Begged Hannah.

"Shish little one I'm not going to hurt you, we're just going to play doctors" said the creepy man in a weary voice.

"WHO ARE YOU? I WANT TO KNOW WHERE MY DAD IS NOW!!!" Hannah demanded.

"Your father is out hunting, you won't be seeing him tonight... Now then which do you prefer? Straight, curved or zig zag?" asked the weird man with a evil laugh to follow.

"You're a sick man, you know that?!" Spat Hannah.

"Remember I'm the Doctor, you're the sick one." Said the twisted man.

"My mum will find you and she will save me, you won't get away with this!!" Shouted Hannah trying to cover up her fear.

"That's what you think...." He finished with a laugh.

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Back at the house Nancy heard a knock at the door, she went to answer it and they was no one there. Nothing but a cardboard box saying this way up the wrong way round, it had a note with it labeled Nancy. She picked it up and took it inside, she phoned the officer on his private number to inform him of the box she has just received.

"Officer, somebody knocked on the door and left a box with a note on my doorstep, the note reads:

" Nancy, it's __, they've got me too and I don't know where Hannah is they've split us up I have contact with the CIA who are trying to find out location, this is a key it gives you access to the barn where Hannah and I were at first, they've moved me from there and I'm not sure whether Hannah is still there, have a search there the address is 48:12 in coordinates that's all the information I have. Find our daughter, good luck."

Author's note: let me know how you think the story is going, getting a little writers block, next chapter coming soon!!

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⏰ Last updated: Jun 23, 2015 ⏰

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