I'am happy that i have both of you [Soukoku]

5

"yeah I was having someone back when we were 15 or 16 and He was the best person I ever met He was nice to me sometimes he says he hates me with his smile. He takes care of me when I was injured or he was injured I take care of him we take care of each other when we are sick. He made me laugh and he made me smile. It was very hard to leave him" Dazai say

"So you are still in love whit him" Yosano ask

"I don't think so it's been 4 years since we met so idk"

"What is the best thing you remember"

"So the best thing I remember is when he falls asleep on my lap while I was reading the book he gave me I looked at him and started playing with his ginger hair or when we were cuddling his blue orbs looking into my.His soft kisses.he was the light in my darknes.He was my everything and I miss him so much"

"Oo~ that's cute you were so cere fully boyfriend" Yosano say

"Yes but I mess up things lot of things and now he probably hates me" Dazai say whit sad voice

"What if we help you to meet him again and he maybe accept your apology" Ranpo said

"No he will hate me more when he gonna talk to me so no"

"So you're gonna die without telling him how you feel "

"Yes I am gonna die whit this feeling"

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I think I record too much I must show this to Tachihara and The Boss of course
honestly I was thinking that Chuuya only feels that .I must take care of that doesn't Kouyou see it.
but I also don't see my ex two years haha funny I hope the bitch die somewhere why I my mind so random nevermind

I have a question is it bad writing or something or my English is too bad or maybe it's so fast please somebody help or does someone see this as a bad story just tell me please what's wrong with the fanfic