Question 59 + Intermission

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Fantoccio: Read Question 58 and you'll see me giving advice to someone in need of writing tips

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Fantoccio: Read Question 58 and you'll see me giving advice to someone in need of writing tips.

Barnaby: Oh dear you poor thing of course I can give you a hug...

Chi and Fantoccio: WAIT NO-

Intermission

Chi: She was reading the script aloud.

Chi: She was reading the script aloud

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Chi: mmkay this is some improvement

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Chi: mmkay this is some improvement. This honestly looks good so far. You just need to make sure not to have too many grammatical mistakes or you'll leave your audience confused. That's all I can say unfortunately.

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