Spy School Relationships

Not an Update

So I am thinking of starting a original book not SS related but I will continue this book.

Here is a Sample:

Mr. West POV

Hello, my name is Jackson West. You may have heard of me. I hold the title of best detective in the world because I have solved The Zodiac Killer case, JonBenét Ramsey case, and The Black Dahlia case (These are real unsolved homicides) and many others. But this is about the one case I couldn't solve... The Snapdragon Case or so I thought.

It was a cold dark morning in the outskirts of Alaska. As always I go out to my storage shed to get wood for my fire. As I sat down and ate breakfast I thought to myself "Great, tomorrow I have to go back to the city." don't get me wrong, I love the city. Just being alone is better. After I finished my breakfast I decided I was going to make my last count. I went hiking, swimming and running. It was very relaxing and calming. By the end of the day I was ready to go back to the city.

The following day I got a call from my superiors that I needed to get back to L.A as soon as possible because since I have been gone there have been multiple kidnappings with little to no evidence to help us find the culprit. To be completely honest I wasn't worried, scared or nervous. When I found out this news I was about to board my plane so I got out my computer and looked at all of the evidence and like they said there was little to no evidence. The only evidence I had was some DNA results and the match ups were to 5 high schoolers. Beginning with Adam Jones (17), Samantha West' Lopez(16), James Smith (18), Liam Lewis (17) and Summer Lee (18). When I finished reading all the names my heart sank to the bottom of my feet. Samantha West' Lopez is my adopted daughter. She decided that she wanted to keep her real last name and I indulged because I didn't really care, all I wanted was to keep her safe.

Once I got to L.A I drove as fast as I could to the L.A.P.D's chief so I could get as much information as I could before I went to the crime scenes. Once I got to the department everyone was frantic. They were testing a lot of DNA as well as doing as much background knowledge of the victims as possible.

"Mr. West we have a slight problem. All of the medical, education and birth files on the victims have been erased." the officer said with worry in his voice

"Everything will be ok. All I need is all the information you have and total control of the crime scenes."

"Ok sir. This is what we found."

There was a paper that had the report on what they found.

"November 14, 2025. From all the evidence that was gathered we have found no sign of forced entry, or homicide in the selected locations. What we have found is that it was a kidnapping for reasons unknown to supervisors. Before the files were deleted we got some important information. All of the victims are close friends, maybe a coincidence but with these things they normally aren't the case. One thing that was unusual is that the victim Samantha Lopez had/has almost no information on her file; the only thing that was on her file was that she was adopted by Jackson West. We understand that it isn't a good idea to involve emotions in cases but Mr.West is the best person for this case. We have NOT released any of this information to the public yet, all they know is that these high schoolers are missing."

After I finished reading I decided to go to the crime scenes. First I got clearance to enter the C.S (Crime Scenes). Then I got the locations where they were located. Finally, I was in my car headed to the first C.S, Adam Jones's house. Once I was there, the house was still taped off with 'Caution Do Not Cross' police tape. At the corner of my eye I saw a surveillance van monitoring the house. Once I told and showed who I was I entered the house. As soon as I entered something immediately caught my eye. There was a shiny sharp object hidden in the Snapdragon flowers. I moved the flowers and it was a box cutter. I immediately put it in an evidence bag and sent it to the DNA Recovery Department and got back to work, but all I could think about was Sammatha.

Tell me what you think 🙂 (BTW I am only 13 so don't expect a masterpiece)