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Before I start editing this book. Which writing style do you guys prefer?
EXAMPLE I :
Y/n was jumping up and down in joy as he was next to Lucifer as Lucifer was making Mac n Cheese for lunch for him.
"Is it almost done?" Y/n asked with a smile which Lucifer chuckled before shaking his head.
"Not quite" Lucifer responded.
Y/n whined impatiently.
EXAMPLE II
Y/n was jumping up and down in joy as he was next to Lucifer as Lucifer was making Mac n Cheese for lunch for him.
"Is it almost done?". Y/n asked with a smile. Lucifer chuckled before shaking his head. "Not quite" Lucifer responded As Y/n whined impatiently.
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Which one fits more better for this book? 🧍🏻♀️
I wanted to ask before I start full on editing this whole ass book😫👍
Y'all in my last chapter I was talking about book ideas and shit but then I noticed a mistake I did.
Howl house x Giyu Reader (male reader)
I MEANT
Howls moving castle X Giyu reader (Male)
Btw want Howl? Or The turnip prince lol
Sorry if some thought "owl house" cuz i haven't watched that show at all........🚶🏻♀️
Bye bye
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