(A/N): Hi lovelies! This is my first chapter so I want to know what you guys think about it! I know, I know, it's really suckish! I promise you it will get better, let's just hope I don't lose interest.
Well, here's the first chapter!
Chapter One
The morning sunshine burned into my eyes as I quickly threw my covers over my face in order to block out sunlight. My mom still hadn't changed my blinds, so I was stuck with dirty brown ripped up blinds covering the glass.
Unfortunately, there was nothing to do today, so I was expecting myself to lay in bed all day doing nothing. As I slowly slid off the bed, I crept slowly towards my bedroom door and pried it open without using the knob.
The air inside our house was extremely chilly as I ran downstairs, shivering. My mother must've been in a happy mood because there was real breakfast on the table, instead of mom's basic boiled egg and toast.
I snatched two boiled eggs and a slice of toast and slowly walked outside, planning to visit Vicky or lay on my porch. The neighbor, Ms.Harper, was outside watering her garden whilst her young 5-year old daughter, Jessie was annoying the shit out of her.
My body collapsed onto the chair as I smeared my eggs across the toast and set it on the porch table. My neighborhood was your basic neighborhood. The houses weren't upscale like the Shadowbridge Commons' houses. They were 1-story, small, and nicely painted.
My eyes trailed from house-to-house, until I reached my best friend, Vicky Fink's house. I began thinking about Noah Fink, Vicky's extremely hot brother. He was my dream-boy and I was madly in love with him. Noah was the type of sweet boyfriend type who cared about his girlfriend, sources, I go to his house almost every day.
I whipped my fluffy blue diary from the box under our porch and flipped it to a blank page.
June 25th, 2013 - Harleigh Williams - 10:54 am
LIST OF HOTTEST BOYS
1. Noah Fink
2. Noah Fink
3. Noah Fink
4. Noah Fink
5. Noah Fink
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"I think it's really cute, Harleigh." Vicky stated, biting into her ham sandwich.
Vicky was staring at me in my leopard print 2-piece bikini that I would be wearing to the pool later.
I took a second glance towards the mirror before turning back to her. "It looks horrible." I said.
In a matter of minutes, a pair of shorts and a tank top were thrown into my face and Vicky muttered something about me, having to wear them.
The shorts were really loose, which was comfortable for me and they did good for my legs, which Vicky said were.. nice.
"Are you ready to head to the pool?!" Vicky screamed, rather happily.
I groaned loudly. "Ready freddy." I said.
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First story to ever finish and be happy with! I would like totally delete my other stories and just give up. I love love love this start, and if it sucks, It'll get better.
Please share and comment on your thoughts. This story is dedicated to lovebecca for the AMAZINGLY CUTE cover! I love it! Thanks, Becca :)
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