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Hi... Ik everyone who was nice enough to read all the way through this mess of a story was pretty disappointed with the "ending" which I agree, I really loved this story up to a point and recently I've gotten a comment asking for some amount of explanation, so here it is. (Hii to that commenter btw)

HYUNLIX
I imagined that Felix would have kept his word and not have seen chan again, so after him and hyunjins break their relationship would have been fine.

THE ENDING
Ik some of you might have thought I would have seungmin go all psycho on changbin(which Ik some of y'all would have wanted, like damn) but no, I specifically made him kill jeongins boss in the beginning to contrast with how he was going to eventually deal with changbin. After the coma, I really wanted to highlight seungmins character development and how much he has calmed down, showing the emotional change he had developed. So THE REAL ENDING would of been seungmin more in shock than anything but he would notice how quilty and miserable jeongin was and decide to forgive him pretty quickly. And one scene that I'm pretty sad I didn't do was one where I was going to have seungmin show up a the bookstore unannounced, changbin was going to greet him regularly unknowing that seungmin had found out about the affair, then seungmin would casually drop that he knew before revealing that him and jeongin are getting married, saying something like-

"thanks for keeping jeongin company while I was gone." Seungin said calmly, leaning his arm on the counter as he played with his wedding band.

"Oh..uh yeah of course." Changbin replied, trying to keep his cool as he shakedly emptied the register.

"I mean, attempting to fuck him was a little much, but that's fine."

Changbin froze, I didn't hear that right, right? Did he just..

"Yeah, yeah that's fine, it's not like you got to." The brunette goes on as he holds up his ring finger. "But I'll get to, y'know to consummate our marriage and all." He says with a triumphant smirk."Oh and you're not invited to the wedding... obviously."

EXTRA'S, random ideas and scenes that didn't make the cut.
•Jeongin was never going to admit to cheating, I actually wrote an entire chapter were Minsung were on a stakeout near a car with changbin and jeongin were making out, and leeknow actually caught them, threatening to fight changbin while scolding jeongin. But it was ofc scrapped.

•originally I was going to have seungmin cheat on jeongin, he was going to get drunk and sleep with some girl. That's why there is foreshadowing in one of the first chapters about changbin liking jeongin, It was bc I planned for jeongin to sleep with him in a revenge plot, but as I kept developing jeongins character I scraped that scenario.

•This one is really fun and I'm actually pretty sad about this one. I was going to write a chapter around Mun's birthday and have seungmin surprise her with a really big gift, the gift? Joshua, from 17. Like I said it would have been super cute and plus a really fun Cameo to write.

•Seungmin was actually going to die?
Yes, the first idea I ever had for the ending was going to be, seungmin and the girls going out for ice cream or sum and while they were out seungmin decides to stop by the bank and while depositing money would be mugged and killed. THANKFULLY, I didn't go with that.

•I also had a lot more fucked up plots surrounding jeongins dad, including a house fire and tons of fights with seungmin but as I realized how much I wanted to focus on seungmin and jeongins relationship, I decided to cut him out rather early.

Ok, that's it guys. Ik no one is completely satisfied with just this, but I hope it at least helped a little. Thx for reading and I PROMISE I will never leave a story unfinished again or this long again cuz DAMN.

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