Snow white but It was written in a more action packed way.

All of it in one chapter.

Snow White but if it was altered in a more action-packed way.

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Chapter 1, the present

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Mirror, Mirror on the wall Who in the land is fairest of all, but Snow White is a thousand times better of a queen and is fairer and less ugly than you.

Stepmother the 2nd Queen (her name is Diana from now on): this is PREPOSTEROUS! How could this bastard daughter of that WRETCHED Queen before me be fairer than me and m-more OF A BETTER QUEEEEEEEN!

Her voice echoed in her chambers around her and she decided to send a 7th Huntsman after her to kill her so she could in a morbid fashion eat Snow White's organs like her liver and lungs so she could have the innards of a fair and beautiful queen. Diana finds the huntsman on a flier labeled, "Huntsman/Bounty hunter for hire, "50 shekels every hour, will kill anyone or bring them in". This seems perfect, Diana said. Ok so what do you want me to do again? The huntsman Bashful said

Diana: I want you to kill a young girl named Snow White then harvest her liver and lungs for me.

Bashful: The bounty hunter: ok how much are you going to pay me?

Diana: Howis 200 shekels or 4 hours of your time to find this girl and do YOUR job!?

Bashful: Uhhh- {this woman is crazy} yeah sure that sounds good. He goes into the forest and goes and finds a small castle {scoffs-this looks more like a winter wonderland then a castle} Bashful Opens the door- { I feel like something might go wrong eh whatever}

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Chapter 2, three weeks before this, 

Snow White a 16-year-old young teenager forced to mature in life due to "unforeseen consequences", is seen chopping firewood in the backyard of her deceased mother's small castle. She does this because her mother taught her how to survive and fend for herself before she died due to a rare sickness. As well as Her mother giving Snow White the best education available and breaking the norms of the land so Snow White could be educated, and gave her high education books for her to read. The reason why Snow White is living in this mini-Castle that her Biological Mother and Father used to have before she was born was. Her mother died when Snow White was 12 years old so, her father went and looked for a new wife and grieved only for a day before moving on. HEr new stepmother Diana, was a wicked woman, she would purposely not give any food to Snow White as well as yell at her, call her profanities if she made a simple mistake, and buy her 3rd rate clothing during winter seasons. However, Snow White had enough so she went and talked to a guard by the front gate of her castle, but Diana saw her and yelled at her accusing her of adultery and banished her outside of the kingdom. Also, her father said this to Snow White before she left.

Father: GOOD riddance, you're the reason your mother died and spat at the ground in front of her.

I knew you were no good, you're constantly crying about your dead mommy, as well as you jussss- ARRRGGGHHH, I AM DISOWNING YOU FROM MY KINGDOM said by Diana.

Snow White looked very hurt but quickly forced herself to not give "THEM" the satisfaction of her tears at this moment and accepted the situation, and went back to her room in the central castle, packed what she had including the survival books, and clothes that she had... And an axe, that her mother had given her before she had died. Snow White grabs her axe and bag as she leaves the kingdom with a new life ahead of her...