Hello guys. I want to do a little retrospective of this first part of the story together with all of you.
Yes, YOU, you're all invited to participate. Leave your comments below where you write to me what your favorite chapters are and why the reasons that led us to appreciate them.
There are chapters that I'm proud to have written and others that I would delete. I tend to generally criticize my work, but in this case, I can identify 3 chapters in particular that I am proud of.
3rd Her body.
Bronze medal for the erotic chapter. And I'll tell you, if we exclude the chapter "her place" it's my very first erotic writing ever. Rereading it, I don't mind the language I used to describe the body and the act. It conveys, at least to me, what I wanted to convey. The sensuality of the first time. Partly drawn from my personal experience. Even though I changed everything to adapt it to a work of fiction.
2nd Her world and our first dance
Silver medal for this marvel. In this chapter, for the first time, I tried to express my artistic sensibility through the gestures of my characters and the environment that surrounds them. In all this, I also tried to recreate the charm of nightclubs, of the night in general. And the sensations linked to the anxiety that one can feel if not accustomed to these places.
1st Her sister
Gold medal for the last chapter. I reread it but I don't feel the need to make corrections. This chapter actually conveys the essence of what perhaps the work should have been from the beginning. Using Glam and Glitz as a pretext to write a story that criticizes the sexual industry of music. And in general, an invitation to girls to live their lives and their sexuality regardless of stereotypes, taboos, and expectations imposed by a bigoted society.
If I had to find a chapter to rewrite, I would say the very first one that opens the work "The show". I hate it. I would rewrite it.
As for the most appreciated chapters, it seems to me that you really like the chapters on walks, such as "a peaceful walk." What led you to appreciate these chapters so much? Write it in the comments.
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