Radioactive Waste AU! (Project 1)

Sonic's Story

THIS INCLUDES SWEARING, DEATH, BLOOD, AND MENTIONS OF FEARS SUCH AS SCOPOPHOBIA.

[The tilde (~) is only used for teasing purposes, there will be no sexual activity between our two main characters.]

So where should I start? I was minding my business walking down to another one of Egghead's old lair, and when I got there it was pretty weird, dude! All these big tanks of these chemicals and stuff...it's kinda hard to explain. Well after looking around I stumbled across one of my greatest enemies...Infinite! "Don't you have somewhere else to be instead of in front of me?" I yawned. But this time he looked different, finally he got some color in him, but, he was more glowing in specific areas, and he had claws grew longer out of his paws...now thinking of it, I didn't really think that was really Infinite. Then the next thing you know, he tried to get a hit at me!
I was taken aback sure, but a guy like me knows how to hold my ground! But I couldn't stay and chat, so I tried to avert the situation by distracting him and running off.
So I did just that!
I guess, half of my plan worked. While I was running away, I crawled through the vents, and the next thing I know...

The next think I know...

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(Out of Sonic's POV)

Well, now that you think about it, sigh I don't remember all the way. But here I am.
E.Sonic: "Heh... now look at you. Your intense heavy breathing, holding back your salty tears. Does it hurt that bad, Detective?~"

Sonic crouches down to this, 'Detective' and pulls his face closer to home with his hand. His heart beats faster. The detective's eye was bleeding savagely, violently.
The blood was gushing down his face so badly, that puddles of the cyan gore, spreading across the solid floor. The hedgehogs' body felt weak and limped.

E.Sonic: "What's your actual name, Detective? Maybe, I won't hurt you~"

The detective trembling with fear as he shakes and stutters his words, mumbles his name.

Shadow: "Sh...Shadow t-the Hedgehog, Detective Shadow the Hedgehog..."

E.Sonic: "Shadow. Hm..." He lets go of Shadow and it pushes him and tosses him to the wall as he bleeds. "Go along now...run. Fast."

Shadow was hesitant to stand up because of his injury. After all, how could you run and stand after that? This made Sonic impatient, irritated even.

E.Sonic: sigh. I'll give you 10 seconds to run, okay?

Shadow grunted and picked himself up with all of his strength as Sonic counted down. He was still in pain, but on his left he saw a worn out crowbar. He swindled around like a dreidel trying to reach the crowbar.
Sonic continued counting down, turned around with his back facing Shadow, he knew it was time to strike.
Shadow gripped the crowbar out of success, and with all his might holding his stomach tightly for suppression, and runs towards Sonic.

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Sonic was knocked out cold.
Shadow was breathing heavily. His heart still pounding, but this time filled with adrenaline. He drops the crowbar and finds something to cover his eye with. "There must be something I can make a tourniquet with.." He thought with stressful ease.He walked around and found nothing.
Shadow did some thinking and tore his jacket sleeve with his claws. He tied his sleeve across his face and tightened it to suppress his eye. Shadow also found a long piece of wood from a crate, so he used it to walk back to the Police Department and get fixed up.
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Sonic woke up but he wasn't glowing. The memories were foggy for him, and he was no longer energized. He was bleeding from his head a bit though. He got up and shook his head. "Urgh..what happened...?"

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Silver was busy examining files until he heard someone enter. His ear twitched and looked at the door as the doorbell rung when the Mobian ran in.

Silver: Shadow?! How did you manage to get this damaged on one case!?

Silver runs to Shadow anxiously, very worried about this injury, but also upset that he got super hurt. He drags Shadow over to his car and walks to his car. When they got in and strapped their seatbelts, they saw droplets of rain dropping down the car windows. Silver kicked the pedal and sped off.
Silvers face was determined while Shadow crossed his arms angrily. Silver noticed his stance and spoke with irritation in his voice.

Silver: You can cross your arms all you want, but you don't have the position to be mad right now.
But what I want to know...

His voice softened as he spoke.

Silver: What happened? I don't understand how you got tore up so badly, I mean look at yourself! You're in dirty clothes that looks like rags, you used your jacket sleeve as a tourniquet, AND YOU'RE BLEEDING OUT YOUR EYE! Did you get jumped!? *sigh* Look, I'm sorry if I came off wrong, and I know I'm just a file worker, but I'm just worried as your brother, man.

Shadow grumbles and told what happened back at the warehouse. Which doesn't seem like a realistic scenario to anyone, especially Silver. Silver laughed as he focused on the road. He was crying of laughter. As Silver snickered and giggled, Shadow removed his tourniquet, the blood slowed down a bit, but it was still visible. Shadow's left eye was blurry, which was a surprise to him when he took it off a bit.
When the car came to a stop at a red light, Sliver wiped his tears as he turned to Shadow.

Silver: Haha! I guess that case really messed up your head after aaaaAAAAAAHH! Why is your blood blue!?

Shadow: You don't think I wondered the same thing?

Silver: And now you're blind!? You were telling the truth!? What the fuck!
Shadow: Calm down, Little Bro. Maybe the ER could run some tests on the blood and me.

The two left and entered the hospital, getting booked straight to a doctor.

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It was 22:37, November 16 2005. Shadow has been in the hospital for about two weeks now, and they still haven't found the answer to the blue blood, it was a mystery for the doctors. But with that, they couldn't let him stay no more. With no information on his blood flow whatsoever, they had no choice but to let him go.

This was my first time writing one of this so give me some tips and some constructive criticism to tell me what I can do better. Bye! :) (*≧∀≦*)