Hey guys! So I orginally wrote this fic in April of 2021 (3 years ago) but I had to stop writing after I almost went to juvie (don't worry I was just being framed). Anyway, I really want to start writing it again so I reread and realized how bad it was since it was clearly written by a 13 yr old. Of course I'm no expert but I've gotten better. I've begun revising some small details and mostly just fixing some grammar.
If you have ANY recommendations on where I should take the story and what you'd like to see in Freya's charater I'd love to hear it.
P.S. Even if you're not gonna read the story I wanna know, what do you think the best writing is? First, second, or third person?
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𝐠𝐨𝐝𝐝𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬 𝐢𝐧 𝐜𝐚𝐝𝐞𝐭𝐬 𝐜𝐥𝐨𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 ; ymir & sister oc
Fanfiction「𝐢𝐭 𝐰𝐚𝐬𝐧'𝐭 𝐬𝐨 𝐛𝐚𝐝 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐤𝐧𝐨𝐰... 𝐛𝐞𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚 𝐠𝐨𝐝𝐝𝐞𝐬𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐚𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐥𝐞」 Freya and her sister, Ymir, are Eldian orphans who grew up on the streets of Marley as beggars. That was until they were adopted by a man who wanted t...
