Give Me Liberty Or Give Me Death: Metal Gear Solid.

Prolouge

February 25, 1991
Khobar, Saudi Arabia

You're taking some time to rest in your barracks, You know get some shut eye after a long day even if it's only 12 PM. The alarms start blaring and then you hear the CIWS Erupt in gunfire and as quickly as you shot up to get ready you hear a series of loud booms and eventually one happens extremely close to you but luckily it had only knocked you unconscious for a minute. Many others are sill trying to figure out what had just happened as many of the barracks buildings have turned to piles of rubble you could only assume it was some kind of missile attack. You were okay but many others weren't as you grabbed your Standard issue M4 You start running around base and asking about what happened, All you see is rubble and dust covering everything but you're sure people need your help
"Holy hell what just happened, How am I alive?" You look over to your left and see a wounded soldier, He was in one of the barracks that were struck and he was missing an arm."OH MY GOD HELP ME PLEASE! I CANT FEEL MY ARM! WHAT HAPPENED?" You pick him up and bring him inside an undamaged building and started to try and stop the bleeding from where he lost his arm "Hey I need you to look at me alright? I'm gonna try and give this news to you but I need you to stay calm. Your arm was blown off in the explosion, I've stopped the bleeding for now but try not to freak out" He replys "What? WHAT DO YOU MEAN I LOST MY ARM MAN IS IT REALLY GONE? OH MY GOD" He started to freak out, You kept him down and got him to calm down "Look man I'm gonna get you out of this but I need you to work with me here. Your arm is gone and nothing can change that, You're lucky you're alive and you should be grateful that you even survived the initial explosion. My names Noah, Noah L/N. What's yours? "My names  Tad, Tad Doyle. Shit man I guess you are right but man I can't help but thank you for saving my life back there I don't know what will happen whenever we get back to America but I'm sure I'll see you there sometime I'll put in a word about you or something".
"Yeah well I'd like to keep in contact with you Tad, you seem like a good person and I'd like to know you more. I figure as much you're gonna be taken back to America in the next few days once the medics patch you up the best they can. Who knows what will happen but I can only imagine."

                  End of Prolouge

This story should go well for the most part and I'm sorry that it's short. I'm gonna work on my writing skills and expand these chapters more but I need feedback on this type of stuff. I'm gonna try and make my writing more clear so it's more easily understandable.