You were just an average person, that's what you've always believed.
And you'll never understand fate's plan, when it pulled you into an another world. Well, whatever it was, they could've at least made it more welcoming.
Instead of empty sockets...
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The title is something I thought long and hard for.
Let me know if you can guess, what it means for our vessel.
I'm dividing my explanation "why I'm doing this". Because, I don't usually read announcements such as this.
I'm doing myself a favor.
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I'm rewriting this whole thing, because I was never really satisfied with it.
I can't continue this book the same way I could with the FGOD Error, because that story was a freeform. Meaning, I could do whatever I want with it, and nobody would get mad at me.
Hollow Knight in the meantime is different. My plans for this plot, was for it to be the backstory of how the Hallownest kingdom has fallen, which would eventually connect to the original video game lore.
Meaning the storyline would be "fixed" according to the effects to the original, this is the cause of the lore in hollow knight. I can't alter the backstory of this one.
And this story I'm currently writing has NO PLAN, like, at all.
My ideas are all over the place and that none of them are connecting, I can't possibly think of a way to fix this.
So, I just decided to rewrite this.
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Don't worry, the events that you've read here will still happen in the rewritten version.
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PLOT
There's going to be A LOT of changes. Most of them are the reasons why it happened, and the reasons I used to make it happen.
The way i just inserted our vessel all over the place, and.. I just can't.
The storyline just sounded shallow and inconsistent.
*We're still going to learn the Nail Arts *We're still going to Unn's temple *We're not gonna fight Hunter the Critter, but we'll still get a beastiary. *We will not be meeting Quirrel.
I've made up a storyline where we would be able to have more interactions with the characters, other than just Lazy Narrative.
Like the Nailmaster brothers, I'm gonna write more than just this:
"Take care, Esmy. Despite your lack of communication, you still emit a calming company." Stated Sheo. Oh yeah, he was quite a talker.
"Oh Sheo, I'm sure they don't need to. The strength they gained in our trainings together will no doubt protect them just fine!" Mato chimed. He's the optimistic one, he usually encourages you when your about to give up learning.
"It's true. A blessing may not be needed, but it is never unavailable. Safe travels, Esmy. Your presence is always welcome." He said, giving you some snacks.
Like, how can you guys read this stuff.. 💀💀💀
And of course...
THE TWIN BELLS IS NOT. THAT. IMPORTANT.
I only did it because we don't make a sound or something, and the bell is the only sound we make. And that's how the citizens of hollownest would recognize us.
Maybe I'll keep the bell, but it won't be the purpose of our story.
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CHARACTER I also don't like the current character I made for you guys.
I was hopping we would be more "emotionless", because we're supposed to be VOID and HOLLOW.
Everything that happened felt like it was specifically FOR the vessel. Like going through a protagonist syndrome.
None of it felt that genuine.
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I know you guys have been waiting for an update for a long time now, and very disappointed to be notified that we're going back to Chapter One..
I'm sorry.
I can't help it.
But I want my story to be better, and make it become a story that I'll never forget.
