Queen Of His Dark World |18+

It's a yes

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Neel pov

As decided today we came to Anmol's home for a marriage proposal. I hopped down from the car followed by Hridyam and Ruhani. Three of us came in the same car. I am feeling nervous and guilty at the same time. I shouldn't have talked to her like that. I really behaved like a jerk with her.

" I need to apologize to her " I said internally.

" Don't worry Neel Bhai everything will be ok " Ruhani assured me.

" Hope so " I said.

Everyone came out from the car and we approached her home.

I ring the doorbell. After one minute a lady opened the door. She looks a little bit like Anmol, maybe she is her mother.

" Hello aunty " I said awkwardly.

" Per chu le tin ke dabbe remember first impression is last impression " Udit whispered in my ear. And I gave him a look.

" Just do " he again said and I bent down to touch her feet. I stood straight. She was looking at all of us in confusion.

" Aap log kon hai ? " She asked.

(Who are you guys?)

Before I could answer I heard a loud painful whimper of someone. I peeped inside the house and my heart beat escalated. There Anmol was lying on the floor fisting her belly. Without caring of anything rushed to her and knelt down before her.

" Are you ok ? " I asked in concern. I panicked just thinking of the worst. Nothing should have happened to her and 'our' baby. I made her sit and she asked for water. I looked around and my eyes stopped on aunty who was looking at us in confusion.

" Aunty, she needs water " I said and she nodded and walked inside the kitchen. She came with a water bottle and made her drink water.

" Kya hua beta tere pet mein lagi hai ? " She asked, seeing her clutching her belly.

(What happened daughter, is it hurting your stomach?)

" No maa I am fine " she said and I took a deep breath in relief.

" Are you sure ? " I asked her to confirm but she didn't reply and stood up. A man came outside from a room and shocked looking all of us.

" Hri.... Hridyam singhania " He shuttered.

" Aap sab yaha kya kar rahe hai? .....kya humse koi galti ho gayi hai ?" He asked in fear. Before Hridyam could say anything Dadi approached him and said politely " Nahi Om tumse koi galti nahi Hui hai "

(What are you all doing here? .... have we made a mistake?)

(No,Om you haven't made any mistake )

" How do you know my name? " He asked. Dadi chuckled hearing him.

" That's not a big deal hone wale sasur ji " I said in my mind.

" Om it's not a big deal for us " she replied.