Author's pov:
The ride was 20 minutes long and these 20 minutes were like 20 hours for Noor..
After 10 minutes Hamza broke the silence knowing well how much Noor talks and being quite is not her thing it is as if she was drinking poison..
"How is your study going?"
Noor looked at him as if she saw an alien her eyes were popping out. After getting no reply he look towards her and got scared she was looking cute though...
"What? Why r u looking at me like this?"
"Nah!!! Nothing ... Just kinda shocked"
"Shocked?"
"Did I say out that loud?" She worriedly asked
"Unfortunately yes" Hamza said while rolling his eyes
"Yeah it's going good"
"What's going good?"
"My studies"
"Ooh haha yes yeah!!" Hamza was nervous God knows why
Noor hummed in reply ..
"Wanna have icecreams?"
"Yeahh"she jumped on her seat
Hamza chuckled looking at her and took her to the nearest icecream stall they had their icecream with lots of talk(Hamza was the listener only, our Noor didn't bothered to give him any time to talk).. Noor was shocked to see this side of rude and arrogant Hamza, this side of him was completely different and Hamza liked this talkative Noor's
After having ice cream both made their way to his house.. the journey was no more silent and he was enjoying it all.. after sometimes they reached their destination, Noor saw aliah from distance and ran towards her as if she was running a marathon..
Noor's pov:
I didn't knew Hamza Bhai the rude man was .... Woah he is good bro he is a good listener. His wife would be lucky afterall who get the chance to have this patience,good-looking , charming,and most important a good listener man..
"Itne tarif to tu apni bhe nhi karti? Kya baat h Bhai kahen pyaar vyaar to na hogya na?"(You don't praise this much? What's the matter girl have u fallen in love) My subconscious mocked
And I was thinking deeply when I saw aliah appi, hehe the solution to my problem I ran towards her, she took me inside there was no one in the living room appi went inside the kitchen I thought of going in the prayer room as probably it was asar time everyone must be praying as expected I saw everyone present there, i joined them too...
After coming out I was with my toxic khala her two rude daughters and my mom... I saw everyone means khala's husband my favourite one whom I lovingly call as 'bubba' Hamza Bhai and my dad..
I ran towards bubba he hugged me and asked about my recent exploits and I told him everything related to me till then his daughters came and said
"Abba u never ask us like this" his elder daughter(Farha) who is of my age said
"Hann Abba" joined by the younger one (Fazilah) who is 16 right now
Bubba royally ignored them and said "Noor beta kya khaogi" (Noor child what will you eat)
I told him as always"kuch bhe chlega bubba" (Anything bubba)
And his daughters uff they were burning bro!!
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Beautiful but incomplete
Fiksi UmumThis story is about a teenage love Noor Abbas with Samir Ahmed An incomplete story -------------------------------------------------------------- "The worst mistake in life is to fall in love in your teenage years.." said Noor "It's your mistake...