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"The sky is on fire"


Initial thoughts:

Heartbreak.

What does it matter anymore?

The sky is on fire

But I embrace the pain

Because you're not here with me.

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HEARTBREAK

It burns, it burns, it burns.

A mark of pain etched into me.

She says I'm no longer hers,

While flames scorch my skin.


I cry, beg her to stay,

But she's walking away,

Leaving me in pain,

My world crumbling.


I scream; a roar of insanity.

The sky is on fire, can't you see?

But I'm freezing, cold inside,

Because she's not here with me.

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