"Behen ho na tum meri?"
"Bohot dukh se kehna padega ha behen hu teri, aur wo bhi badi behen"
✨ Akshara Goenka ✨
✨Aarohi Goenka ✨
Two sisters, who are always irritated from each other have actually love for each other blooming in their heart. Woul...
First of all this is not a chapter. Nothing related to the story, because it is already completed. And every ending gives birth to a new beginning.
My reviews about this book?
1] The first few chapters are probably too cringe. Even, I don't like reading them. Like the narration is good, but dialogues just eww. Till the end of the story, I see myself growing as a writer. So, this story was like my first try for a recipe. The dish is not a disaster, but not too delicious.
2] I wrote this story, because I was just scrolling through some reels of Akshara and Aarohi. Then, I saw a show based on sisters. So....😔🎀
3] To be honest, Karishma and Pranali had something which could be crafted into a perfect shape. But then, makers ruined much beautiful things about the show. Most importantly the couple AbhiRa, they were the first ITV couple I was so hooked with.
4] In the initial episodes of Gen 3, even I hated Aarohi. Like how selfish and narcissist she was. [I honestly did not have any idea about the tag 'ganda khoon' and her parents demise which the little girl had to go through]. But then I caught myself being selfish too. And then I realised we all humans have similar traits like Aarohi. 🤭
5] I liked the character of Sirat. But her track seemed force and unnecessary. So, I decided that Naira would be the mother of Aarohi in this too.
6] People blaming me for the ending. Mate, I had to do this. Well you all expect the sisters, who were apart for 3 years, to suddenly not misunderstand each other? Geez.
7] You all worried over Aarohi's building hate for Akshara? Lol. They are my Akshara and Aarohi. And this story's Kairav is mature enough to solve the riot between his sisters.
8] Due to the death of their parents, Akshara and Aarohi would have an entire personality switch, with extra nooks.
9] Aarohi is a mindful introvert in this story, who had issues in conversing her feelings. At the end of the story, she learns how to take a stand for herself.
10] Akshara was deprived of the love and concern, she needed. For 3 whole years. So, she tends to build her feelings inside her. At the end of the story, she finally opens to Aarohi.
11] It is ironical that the same Kairav, who hated watching his sisters fighting over silly matter. At the end, he was the one who stopped Akshara and Aarohi's fight.
12] Manish Goenka, never showed emotions. Till his son's death broke his tough exterior.
Declarations -
1] So....I have decided to, WRITE a story of Akshara and Aarohi's adulthood. First it would be a book for Akshara's love story (including Aarohi ofcourse) and then other one solely for Aarohi (including Akshara ofcourse). And those two books, would be connected to this one.
2] There you would see, how Aarohi actually softens upto Akshara and helps her to breathe freely.
3] Well, do not hate any character. This is how we live, they live.
4] Well, I CANNOT make any promises. It's sure, I would be posting. WHEN? Not sure.
So....goodbye mates, till we meet for the another time, another day and if I publish the story...I would attach the link here.
Love. >3 (I can post few bonus chapters or anything when an idea pops up in my mind)
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