I can say that the author clearly had a story to tell, the premise fell short of its potential. The plot was simplistic and lacked depth and the characters were one-dimensional. The “mystery” was easily deduced, robbing the story of any suspense. The pregnancy storyline was a nice touch, but overall, the narrative lacked the intricacy and complexity necessary to engage the reader.
There are also tense/voice changes throughout, it shifts from I to She/He very quickly and it makes the reading experience disorienting. I suggest the author work on grammar and plot compatibility in order to create a compelling tale.
Feelings Factor: The emotions portrayed in the story, while present, lacked a certain depth. The relationship between Y/n and Jimin was portrayed as loving and caring, but lacked the complexity and development that would have made their bond truly compelling. The dialogue was straightforward, and the interactions between characters were not as rich as they could have been, resulting in a somewhat flat emotional experience.
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DuchessofSwitzerland Book Name: What a Princess Needs To Be
