a long way/ Elizabeth Olsen x female reader

Chapter eight

The next day, Elizabeth and I met again in the practice room, both of us eager to continue refining our performance. We had fallen into a rhythm, each of us understanding our roles in the piece. I was beginning to feel more confident about our chances.

As we played through the piece again, I noticed how our interpretations were starting to blend seamlessly. My fluidity complemented Elizabeth's precision, and together, we created a version of "Clair de Lune" that was both technically impressive and emotionally resonant.

But as we were finishing up, Mrs. Lewis walked in, her expression unreadable as always. She listened to us play for a few moments before stopping us with a raised hand.

"You've made good progress," she said, her tone neutral. "But there's something missing."

Elizabeth and I exchanged puzzled glances. We had worked so hard, what could be missing?

Mrs. Lewis looked at us, her eyes sharp. "It's technically perfect, yes. But where is the emotion? The connection? This piece is about more than just playing the right notes. It's about feeling, about communicating something deeper. Right now, it sounds like two talented pianists playing together. What I need to hear is one voice, one unified expression of the music."

Her words hit hard, and I could feel the weight of her criticism. She was right. We had focused so much on getting everything technically correct that we had lost sight of the emotional core of the piece.

Elizabeth was the first to speak. "We'll work on it," she said, her voice steady but with a hint of determination. "We'll make it right."

Mrs. Lewis nodded, satisfied with the response. "Good. I'm looking forward to hearing it tomorrow." With that, she left the room, leaving us alone with our thoughts.

For a moment, neither of us spoke. Then Elizabeth turned to me, her expression serious. "She's right, you know. We've been so focused on getting it perfect that we've forgotten why we're playing this piece in the first place."

I nodded, feeling the same sense of realization. "We need to find the emotion in it. We need to connect, not just with the music, but with each other."

Elizabeth looked at me, her eyes searching mine. "Let's play it again," she said, "but this time, let's not think about the notes. Let's just feel the music, and see where it takes us."

I agreed, and we sat down at the piano once more. This time, as we played, I let go of my need to be perfect. I let the music flow through me, responding to Elizabeth's playing, feeling the emotion in each note, each phrase.

As we played, something shifted. The music became more than just notes on a page. It became a conversation, a shared experience. I could feel Elizabeth responding to me, and I to her, as if we were finally speaking the same language.

When we finished, there was a moment of silence. I looked at Elizabeth, and she looked back at me, both of us knowing that something had changed.

"That was different," she said softly, a small smile playing on her lips.

"It was," I agreed, feeling a sense of accomplishment. "I think we finally found it."

Elizabeth nodded, and for the first time, I saw a flicker of warmth in her eyes. "We're ready for tomorrow."

And for the first time, I believed it. We were ready.