Verde Crows: Lost In Another World (completed)

Character Bio & Commentary Ending

Spoilers alert!

Don't read this if you wish not to get spoiled.

With the Reincarnated AI finally ending, albeit rushed, I have to say, it's pretty much a miracle by force that I got this far. I wasn't interested in continuing before my co-author took over, nor did I like many of the characters—especially Liam. I initially planned to NTR him twice. The first instance was when Charlotte almost got raped, but my co-author changed it, finding it too extreme. My original plan was to give Liam a character development arc, where he fails to save her—an "it's too late" type of scenario. The second instance was with Claire, but I removed the NTR element because she didn't have feelings for him. Instead, I turned it into a demonization plot where, again, he arrives too late to save her.

The latter half of Volume 2 was supposed to focus on Charlotte and her mission to save her family, with an explosive conclusion targeting those playing against her, orbital bombardment stuffs and military of Liam actively shitting on them, followed by an epilogue that hinted at a cliff hangar about the Imperium arc. Volume 3 would've been 10-14 chapters of orbital fleet supremacy against the Imperium. In the latter half, fight against Achar and Marzim take over the Imperium, revising the country with energy finally pumped into Alumina. The last three chapters plus the epilogue were meant to focus on ancient dragons, obliterating them, and thus Liam got the lab where he could finally obtain a physical body. Volume 4 was where things got over-the-top in terms of power scaling.

In the first half of Volume 4, Alumina was accused of interfering with mortal affairs, which allowed devils to interfere as well. This resulted in wars featuring supernatural disasters with anime-level logic invading her world, pitting them against Liam's 23rd-century military. The devils were eventually defeated, but the existence of powers that shouldn't have been on that planet caused a bigger problem. Alumina was ordered to remove Liam from existence but refused, leading to her imprisonment. Liam, pissed knowing it, turned the entire divine realm upside down, launching divinity-infused anti-matter missiles that caused a spree of explosions in the gods' gardens, effectively declaring war against the gods.

With the power of divinity in Liam’s body, channeled by the people of Alumina’s world, Liam could now hurt and kill gods. He became a Kratos-like figure for the next 100 years, fighting alongside his trusted dog, Fenrys (or Fenrir), who obliterated an entire region while battling a devil. Liam slaughtered gods left and right, though most were lower-ranking. Some gods, however, were happy to lend him a hand, helping Alumina escape and providing support. Meanwhile, others wanted Liam dead to maintain the divine hierarchy.

To combat this, Liam's space dilation magic allowed him to mass-produce ships at an absurd rate—every five seconds, a 3-kilometer-long battleship rolled out of time-dilated factories. Shitting out as many planet ending battleships on his side. The war eventually ended when mid- and high-ranking gods granted Liam demi-god status, and later, full godhood, bestowed by a liberated Alumina, making him her husband. In the rushed conclusion of Volume 4, a lot of content was cut. But the general outlook shouldn't be difficult on the rushed Vol. 2 and intended vol. 4 writings.

Liam Iserlohn

Epithet: Destroyer, Emperor, Demigod, Android, Verde Crows, Sovereign of Destruction, Genocider, Main character.

Commentary: The protagonist of this show. A harem bastard, naive and annoying character to me. Should get NTR'd, but my co-author aborted it. Slow pace of character development, pushover, arrogant personality, way too optimistic. (I love aggressive women)

Lynnette

Epithet: General, Black Storm Hero, Berserk Princess, 3rd Empress.

Commentary: Redhead, she loved Liam mostly due to Alumina tying their souls to each other. Hurt any of them in sight, and it will make her scarier than a dragon. She's dedicated as a wife, but she sucks at cooking—don’t eat her food if you wish to live. She's quite cunning militarily but sucks at daily life. Too innocent but very aggressive in bed. Mother of 3. (She’s jealous of Noel and Sistiene having privileges she can’t get openly in public with Liam, so she puts everything and vents it during their nightly exercises with Liam.)