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1) What is your favorite scene or quote in the story?

2) Which chapter was the slowest (needs most improvement)?

3) Did you relate to Gon or Killua more?

4) Was there any chapters that disturbed you LOL?

5) Which scene is the most emotional? And which is the blandest?


Lastly, if you guys are up to it, share your stories in the comments!

I won't be hurt by any form of positive nor negative feedback, so please, speak your mind! I thrive to get better at writing and by satisfying fellow readers too.

Thank you all for reading this! I had so much fun writing it!!

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