IM BACK BABY

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Okay so I've been writing a lot more and I think I'm ready to come back HOWEVER I wasn't going to make this post because I won't come back officially until a month or two HOWEVERRRRR the reason I am writing this is because I have an idea for a separate book I want to work on but I DESPRATELY need opinions and feedback before I officially start it.

The story revolves around Twins duo and Quackbur and has a MAJOR tw for death, mourning, and self destructive behavior.

IF YOU DONT WANT SPOILERS AND THINK YOU MUGHT READ IT WHEN IT COMES OUT DONT CONTINUE READING IF YOU DONT THINK UOU WILL READ IT AND OR JUST DONT MIGHT SPOILERS KEEP READING.


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Okay so Wilbur dies right? And like Technoblade and Quackity are fucking DESTROYED. Technoblade because he just lost his twin someone who had been there for him through EVERY moment of his life. Quackity because he lost the love of his life, soulmate, and best friend. Right? Okay so here's where I need your help....

-THE DILEMMA-

This story is going to be a fucking emotional emotional roller coaster as it goes through the minds of two mentally ill teenagers going through grief. HOWEVER I don't know what exactly is too far for the story... what I mean by this is that honestly ever sense I first even thought this story I wanted Technoblade to commit by the end of the story out of grief and loneliness and just everything that happens and takes place in this story. But like I'm not sure if that's too much because well two other characters die in it beforehand and it's like? Is that's TOO much death?

HOWEVER the thing that I REALLY need help on is this next idea that I'm going to explain...

Okay so Technoblade and Quackity basically use each other like CONSTANTLY after Wilbur's death.

Because to Quackity, Technoblade is his savior. See.. Quackity was so deeply in love with Wilbur soot that it was actually terrible for his mental health however this wasn't noticeable in the story but anyway I digress. Because of this infatuation that Quackity had after Wilbur's death he just wasn't the same person anymore. He was destroyed and couldn't even recognize the person he was becoming. Technoblade would be the one to help him out of this. Technoblade in Quackitys mind is just a replacement for Wilbur he looks exactly like him and lives in the same house and in the mental state he's in he find that he can just fully convince himself that his boyfriend never died and that he's right here. This makes Quackity look at Technoblade highly and like a god and becomes obsessed with him because he was finally getting "better" and this was all thanks to him.

To Technoblade, Quackity was dare I say his victim??? Because Technoblade has an extreme attachment issues. He was EXTREMELY attached to his inner circle of friends and family however was ESPECIALLY attached to Wilbur, Quackity, Tommy and Philza. Because of this attachment he wants to be able to help them through grief while also being in grief himself. So as Quackity explains to Technoblade how he feels an idea sparks in Technos mind. If he simply acts like Wilbur he'd be helping not only them but himself as well as a twisted part of himself sees it as keeping his brother alive. As this goes on however he begins to see Quackity as his duty. Quackity was the thing that Wilbur cared for the absolute most. So Technoblade sees it as his responsibility to care for him because his brother can't anymore. He starts to see Quackity as this helpless creature that needs him and in turn this makes Technoblade gain a superiority complex that helps him get "better"

The part that I need an opinion on is how far this twisted power dynamic should go. because it COULD go as far as Technoblade wearing Wilbur's clothes and glasses. It COULD go as far as Quackity calling Technoblade by Wilbur's name. It COULD go as far as Technoblade taking on Wilbur's habits, hobbies, and personality. It COULD go as far as Quackity kissing Technoblade and becoming FULLY convinced that Technoblade IS Wilbur.

That's what I need an opinion on because I have an idea for how this COULD go and in my head it sounds so fucking twisted but that's what makes it ALL the more exciting and interesting of a plot.

If you are confused or need an example I can make one!!

But yeah so please comment what you guys think and help me out thank you so much

Bye bunnies!!! 🍄💕✨

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