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Whom are you calling out for , Dear Miss ?
The one who stole your peace,
Or the one who ignored your plea's?
All you alright ?
Don't you dare lie to me,
For I see the pain you forced to flee.
I was abandoned too,
But I will be glad to stay with you.
All we need to do is find peace within,
Since the world is too cruel to believe in.
Why don't we create our own ?
Where you and I will wear the crown.
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Hey fellas !
As I already said this was one of my old poems. Now that I read this, I feel this poem is too.. Childish ? But feel free to express your opinion. It matters the most to me. If you do think this is Childish or too cringe-filled please let me know so I can improve in future.
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