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𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖 ☞ "𝐈𝐑𝐑𝐈𝐓𝐀𝐓𝐄𝐃 𝐀𝐍𝐃 𝐈𝐍 𝐋𝐎𝐕𝐄"

࿚❧❁⚚ 1st Book Review: Irritated and in Love

Book by hiddenlive

Reviewed by summer_moonlove

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Feedback:

What I Liked Most:

The book cover beautifully captures a vibrant theme, symbolising the colorful aspects of life. The opening scene pulls readers in, setting the tone with a playful exchange between Tavni and Vishnyak that's both charming and relatable.

Vishnu's character is especially captivating, bringing warmth and depth to the story as he grows with each chapter. The narration is smooth .

Altogether, this book feels like a journey through life's high and lows, filled with laughter, conflict, and growth. It's a delightful read that leaves you rooting for the characters.

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༐༈༐ Suggestions for improvement:

Character Development: Add more introspective moments for Tavni and Vishnyak to give readers a deeper understanding of their thoughts, motivations, and emotions.

Pacing: Slow down the narrative in key scenes to allow for more depth, especially in emotionally charged moments.

Plot Structure: Avoid repetitive plot points across multiple chapters and condense where possible.

Descriptive Language: Rework the descriptions in the early chapters to add more vivid details, which will help set the scene more effectively. Avoid using the same descriptive Language for both the Author's POV and the Character's POV to maintain clear narrative perspectives.

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࿅ Most Engaging Parts:

The endearing moments between Tavni and Vishnyak, which add a lovely warmth and charm to their dynamic. The scene where Vishnu reassures Tavni about her curves is particularly touching, showcasing his sensitivity and her insecurities in a heartfelt way.

The narration style is a highlight, flowing smoothly without relying on complex vocabulary, which keeps the story accessible and enjoyable. These elements create a captivating, relatable story that resonates with readers on an emotional level.

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♩☆♭ Overall Rating: 4.1/5

Book cover: 4.5/5

Characters: 5/5 (quite unique characters)

Story line: 3.8/5 (good story line)

Plot: 4.1/5 (keeps readers engaging to read)