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Review => "Mohini"

Author:  KalaKatha

Reviewed by : theyluvsree

What I 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞𝐝 𝐦𝐨𝐬𝐭: This story begins with a captivating narrative, richly detailed descriptions drawing readers into its depth. Although concise, the plot is engaging and well-crafted. Roop stands out as a strong, bold protagonist, brought to life through vivid descriptions. Her interactions with Hiran are skillfully woven, revealing a gentle and caring side to his character. Together, they form a compelling couple. The blend of revenge and romance creates a thrilling experience, keeping readers invested. The revenge plot and its aftermath are expertly handled, making for an absorbing read. Overall, this story excels in character development, plot progression, and emotional resonance. ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• ★𝐒𝐮𝐠𝐠𝐞𝐬𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐈𝐦𝐩𝐫𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭: • Make the paragraph more shorter to easy read. • There are some grammar mistakes so correct it. • Use more punctuation for making it easy to read. ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• ★𝐌𝐨𝐬𝐭 𝐄𝐧𝐠𝐚𝐠𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐏𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐬: Roop and Hiran's romance is captivating, with moments of tender doubt.The revenge plot against the family adds depth, while Roop's internal conflict about her feelings for Hiran keeps readers invested Roop's emotional turmoil make for a gripping read. •••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••  ★𝐎𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐑𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 : 4.8/5
Book cover : 4.5/5 (it's fits the story). Characters : 5/5 (all of them are interested in their own way).
Story line : 4.5/5 (really good story line). Plot : 4.8/5 ( really interesting)