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SCARS THAT HEALED US

Book Name : Scars that healed us

Author: mio_hoor

Reviewed by: summer_moonlove

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Overall Rating: 5/5

Book Cover: 5/5

Plot: 5/5

Story line: 5/5

Character Development: 5/5

Writing Style: 5/5

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Likes:

The book cover is captivating and immediately catches the eye. The opening scene, where Jeon Y/N kills Ji-Ah, is attention-grabbing and sets a powerful tone that pulls readers in. I appreciate the way the characters' thoughts are portrayed; it's done with depth and authenticity. The plot is intriguing, keeping readers engaged, while the scenes and dialogues are well-crafted and compelling. The writing style is truly exceptional, with each line connecting seamlessly with the reader, drawing them deeper into the story. This blend of thoughtful narrative and engaging dialogue makes the book a memorable read.

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Suggestions for Improvement:

Reduce the length of passages and chapters to enhance readability. Keeping sections concise will create a more engaging flow, making the story easier to follow and maintain the reader's interest. Shorter, impactful chapters and passages can help keep the pacing tight and the narrative focused.

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Most Engaging Parts:

One intense moment unfolds when Mrs. Jeon discovers that Ji-Ah is not, in fact, responsible for her sister's death. Overwhelmed with guilt and despair, she attempts to end her life but fails. In a chilling response, Jungkook calls her a sinner, declaring that she deserves a slow and painful punishment. Later, Mrs. Jeon learns she is pregnant and contemplates sharing the news with her husband. When she finally does, Jungkook surprises her by accepting the baby, even congratulating her. However, their complicated relationship takes another turn when she goes missing, leaving Jungkook deeply worried and frantically searching for her. Misinterpreting his actions, she believes he cares for her, only to be heartbroken when he reveals he is concerned solely for the unborn child. Jungkook's words cut deeply as he makes it clear that he feels nothing for her, intensifying the emotional tension between them.

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Final Thoughts:

*Scars That Healed Us* is a gripping mafia romance fanfiction that follows the tumultuous relationship between Jungkook and Jeon Y/N. After Jeon tragically kills her sister-in-law Ji-Ah, unaware of the true circumstances behind her sister's death, she is left to grapple with guilt and remorse. This act severs her bond with Jungkook, the man she loves, who now harbors deep resentment toward her. As the story unfolds, Jeon struggles with the weight of her actions and the loss of her husband's affection. Will Jungkook find it in his heart to forgive her, or will she be condemned to live with her guilt?