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𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖 ☞ "𝐃𝐎𝐋𝐋 𝐇𝐎𝐔𝐒𝐄"

•*⁀➷2nd Book Review: Dollhouse
Book By: arieeewrites
Reviewed By: blu_haze

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୨୧What I Liked Most:

The story opens with an intriguing beginning, This immediately hints at hidden layers beneath the perfect façade, pulling readers into the complexities of the Adani and Cruz families.

The characterization of Raina as a rebellious middle child who uses love as a game adds depth and relatability. Her bold personality and desire to irritate her family give the narrative a unique edge.

The dynamic between Raina and August Cruz, framed as “possessive, obsessed enemies to lovers,” promises exciting tension and emotional conflict, which is a captivating aspect of the story.

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Suggestions for Improvement:

Character Backgrounds: Adding more context about the Adani and Cruz families could strengthen the plot, helping readers understand the origins of Raina’s motivations and her complex relationship with her family and August.

Emotional Depth: While the premise is compelling, infusing more emotional depth into Raina’s interactions, particularly with August, would make the story more impactful.

Pacing: Some scenes could benefit from a slower buildup, allowing readers to fully experience the tension between characters and feel more invested in their journey.

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ᥫ᭡.Most Engaging Parts:

The contrast between the perfect image of the Adani family and the reality of their inner turmoil creates a compelling backdrop for the story.

Raina’s “game” of revenge against her family and her rivalry with August Cruz gives the narrative an edgy and unpredictable feel.

The mysterious “childhood accident” and its influence on Raina’s character development add intrigue and keep readers hooked.

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୨୧ Overall Rating: 4.5/5

Book cover: 5/5 (it is really intriguing, black suits well!)
Characters: 4.8/5 (all the characters are really interesting)
Story line: 4.5/5 (really unique story line)
Plot: 4/5 (really engaging and interesting to read)