Hey everyone, just wanted to add this to say a few things about the story so you get it a little better and a few other things for just an fyi.
Okay, so in the beginning Bruno was very sweet and adamant on taking things slow not because he was a nice guy but because he needed to gain Bianca's trust. He needed to feel like he had her trapped which is why he wanted to marry so fast, why he was always a little too kind, and why he wanted to extend a family with her. After they lost their baby for Bruno it was getting harder for him to pretend he cared for Bianca and her feelings which is why he was always "working". I also had his true colors come out at the end for those that wondered "how could Bruno go from loving Bianca and being so kind to her to this?" It's because he wasn't really this way it was a front he didn't see worth keeping.
As for Bianca and Harry well there relationship came later and was short lived because that's what I wanted it to be. After harry kissed Bianca he left and she continued hating him because this isn't like other stories where the girl feels like the guy is fucking up her whole life but she doesn't care because for some reason she's kind of stupid like that and she falls in love with him like nothing anyway. I wanted Harry and Bianca to connect through a traumatic time because sometimes that's when people are most vulnerable and they make unreasonable decisions because they feel unloved and alone.
Things that aren't okay like cheating usually causes a whirlwind of unwanted events. It feels like everything is falling apart at once.
If You want something explained, let me know and I'll gladly answer.
A few other things.
• this story won't have an alternate ending. This is how I, the author, wanted it to end. It's what I had planned from the beginning and if it's not what you expected you are free to leave a comment but please keep them reasonable and respectful.
• I won't be editing mostly because I have a life and this just for fun. Every author makes rushed mistakes which is why they edit. I don't take it so seriously. This is meant to help give me something to occupy my time when I feel stressed or overwhelmed so when people attack me and make this a bigger deal than it is, it's kind of annoying because I don't actually care so it's just unnecessary noise in my ear.
• leaving negative comments (that are boarder line rude) have no place because quite frankly they only make me laugh.They aren't going to make me change the ending.
If you're looking for a story that has a happy ending by me Id suggest my new story CHEF (it's 4ch in if you want to check it out) It's definitely a love story where love and the right person can change you.
Thanks again,
Diana 😊
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Never | (Harry Styles AU) • COMPLETE
Fanfiction"Sometimes the things that start off great end BAD.. ..and sometimes the things that start wrong, end WORSE." Started: OCT. 24th 2014 WARNING: explicit language & sexual content.