When Tris left to see Christina, I can go to Evelyn. She is still in the city. I actually really don't want to go again and see her, but I have to. She has nobody else.
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I see Evelyn. Alone.
"Evelyn." She looks surprised.
"Tobias, sun, you came?"
"Yes, and I want to say some things and than I go back to Tris."
When I say Tris, I see a flash of anger in her eyes. She still doesn't like her.
"Evelyn. I know you don't like Tris, but I love her and I also ts her that I love her. So you can be upset with that, but I still want to be with her. That was the first thing I wanted to say."
I see that she wants to say something.
"Ssh. I am not done yet.
I also want to say that I'm not going back to Chicago. I am going to start a life with Tris. Not in Chicago but far away. So I think this is the last time I see you. "
She is really upset now. But it doesn't matter to me. She has made me upset years ago and I was only a kid.
"But Tobias.. I want to see my grandchildren grow up. Even if they're Tris'. You can't do this to me Tobias. I want to be a part of your future life. I really want. You're all what I have. The city here is a chaos. You can help me to make from this city a place to call home. Please come and live here with Tris."
I am shocked. I never have her seen so vulnerable like this. All I knew about her was that she is a strong woman, but apparentely she is not. I think I actually want her to be my mother. But only if she also wants to be the mother of Tris.
"I will ask Tris if we can live here. But only if you accept Tris as your daugther."
She has actually tears in her eyes!
"Yes Tobias, I will do my best to accept her as my daugther and I prove I will be there for you two."
"Thank you mom. I think I can regulate that we are going to live her. But now I'm going to Tris. It is a long ride and I want to speak to and see her. Goodbye Evelyn."
"Goodbye sun." She says with a smile.
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When I came home, Tris was waiting for me.
"What did you do?"
"I went to see Evelyn you remeber?"
"O yes, how did it go?"
"I told her that we would go to another city but she wants to come also because she wants to see her grandchildren grow up. So do you want to go to Chicago and help rebuild it?"
"Well I think yes. Than will our children will at least have one grandma.
Where are we waiting for than? Let's go to Chicago!" Tris said.
I grin and know we'll have a happily ever after.
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Alligiant: how it should have ended
FanfictionThis is how I think Allegiant should have ended. Tris is alive and is going to have a happily ever after with Tobias. Everybody else who died in the book is dead, except Uriah who did come out his coma. I hope that you all will enjoy this story as...
