I'm finally beginning to remake my first book, and I'm gonna put both the old chapters here and my unfinished remake of the prologue.
Prologue- Reincarnation
[3rd POV]
We open to the middle of the day, where we can see Y/N park his custom red and black BMW I8 in a parking spot a his huge gamestop that was near his house.
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Y/N turned the car off, before looking in back seat to see his 12 year daughter, Katie, Katie had his hair and had his late wife's sea blue eyes, when Y/N looked in the back seatd he saw Katie looking out the left window staring at the huge gamestop, Y/N smiled and spoke with a tone of caring. "You ready to go inside?" Katie immediately looked at her father and excitedly nodded while smiling. Y/N chuckled, before opening his car door, stepping out and lowering his seat so Katie could get out, Katie quickly and carefully got out of the car and Y/N closed the door when she fully got out.
Y/N pulled out his car keys and quickly lock the car, before pocketing the keys, Katie mean looked at the game stop excitedly while standing close by Y/N, once Y/N put his keys in his pocket he looked down at Katie and smiled. "You ready?" Katie immediately looked at Y/N and smile. "Yes, I've been really, really, really excited to get Cyberpunk Red, so me, you and miss Diana can play!" Y/N chuckled and smiled at her. "That's great and from how much you've told me about it, it should be fun!"
Katie nodded, and the two walked into the large gaming store, as Y/N and Katie walked into the shop, an expression of slightly shocked and excitement quickly grew on Katie's face as shd saw how big the store was, Y/N looked down at Katie and smiled at his daughter's expression, he said. "We'll head to the desk and ask the people at the desk, where it is." Katie's snapped back towards him, causing a small giggle to leave his lips, Katie then excitedly nodded and the both of them walked over to the front desk, where a female employee, with dark brown hair, lightly tan skin and was in the usual Gamestop employee attire, the employee looked up from her phone and smiled at Y/N and Katie. "Hi, how I can help you?"
Y/N looked down at katie, who looked up him, he then gestured for her to speak to the employee, Katie nodded and looked at the employee who looked down at Katie. "... Um.... we looked... online and saw that.... you have.... um the the board game Cyberpunk Red?" The employees eyes slightly widen, but looking back at Y/N and then at Katie, before looking back at with a look of both realization and excitement. "Oh! Your that family that came in a year ago and got that Fallout Tabletop game!"
Y/N laughed and nodded, while Katie looked at the ground nervously, Y/N looked down at Katie, before sighing. "Katie." Katie looked up at her father, who gave her a gentle smile. "Why don't you go look for a new game you can play on your PS5?" Katie's face grew excited and she quickly nodded, before running off towards the PS5 section, Y/N watched his daughter run off and let out a small sigh. Y/N then turned to the employee and a small smile. "Sorry, she gets nervous talking to new people." The employee shakes her head before saying. "No, no it's alright, my brother was like that when we were younger so I understand." Y/N smiled at employee, before asking in a polite manner. "So were is it?"