.::Friday::.
Ray p.o.v
So Craig and Bree decided to have a hotel party, and it was banging. Right about now, me and Bree were in a room all alone, she was tempting me bad.
She got on top of me rubbing her hands up and down my abs. She kissed me. "Let me be incontrol"
"No can do, I'm in control since its your birthday ma." I winked and put her underneath me. I slid her shorts and thong off and started eating her out.
"Oh shit, Ray, ummphh!" I stuck my long tongue deeper in her and that made her back arch and her head swing back. "Uh Uh Uh Raaaaay" she moaned, pushing my head deeper.
After my tongue got I came back up and slipped my condom on and went in.
~~2hrs later~~
We collapsed and tried to catch our breath. She cuddled up against me. And said "I love you Ray." My eyes bulked.
Do I love her? Do I don't know what to say.. umm "Mhmm.." What the hell? What was that Ray?
Then our room door was opened and 3 niggas rolled through and started shooting. "DUCK BREE DUCK!" She was too late and I heard her yell, and the door shut. I quickly through some clothes on and picked her up.
I ran out the hotel. "Yo Ray, what happened?!" Craig was right behind me with Bianca trying to fix their clothes.
"I'll tell you when we get there!"
~Hospital~
They had just took Bree into the Er. I explained to Bianca and Craig what happened. Craig was mad and Bianca started crying.
Me? Well I was stuck on the fact she said she loved me. Do I feel the same? Most girls wouldn't say 'I love you' afterwards. Do I even have feelings for her? I asked myself so many questions it was getting over barring. My head even started to hurt.
Am I 'Ready for love'? I need to get some air. "Hey, I'll be back later, I need air. If they call yall back for her just text me." Craig nodded. "Bianca, I need to make a stop at home. Wanna come?"
"Nah, Imma wait here."
"Aight."
I got in my car and headed straight home. I took a shower and walked into the guest room were Aunt Ellen was.
"Hey hun, whats up?" She said closing her work book.
"Auntie, Im having girl troubles." I sighed. I started to rebraid my hair.
"What type?"
"Well, I was 'dating' my bestfriend's sister. Only to fuck and duck her. If he found out he'd beat my ass. Anyways, so we did it and she said I love you Ray, and all I said was Mhmm. Then soon after 3 goons came in and shot her. I don't know if she's okay because I left the hospital because my head was overwhelmed with questions."
"Well, if you love her, your heart will show you. When your around her, she makes you smile just from her presence. When she crys you feel bad, when yall argue you can't stay mad. And you feel different about her than any other girl you've been with. If not, you have no feelings for her. You wouldn't even care if she looked at another guy with you."
"Thanks Auntie, I love you!" I hug and kissed her cheek. As I went back and laid in my bed I got a text.
Prodigy@<3: She's in acoma...
Ray2wiceIfya: Man, Im sorry.
That's all I could say..
5months later...
Bree p.o.v
I sat in this bed eyes shut mouth closed. I couldn't find the strength to talk. I'm still pronounced in 'acoma'.
Even though I'm in 'acoma' I hear all. Bianca's been by, she's been crying hard. I guess she really is my bro for my life. Craig was here everyday, especially because school was out. I heard them have a semi-graduation ceremony in my room. A tear escaped my eye letting them know thanks. The gang came by even the boss came to pay respect. Even Monique came in to see me. I was surprised.
Ya know, the one person I've been awaiting to come in was Ray, after that night I said I loved him I never remembered what he said. I hope he didn't break up with me.
As usual I felt hands rubbing my hair. "Hey sis, its me ole Craig. I want you to know we got accepted to Flager College (College in Florida.) Yea, I know you may never wake up, but lets be safe then sorry. "
1..2..3"T-t-thank Y-Y-you" I cracked a smile.
"Bree'ann!?" He semi-yelled.
"Yes? Can I have some water?"
"Oh Yes." He brung me some. I sat up. "Oh crap." My body was sore."What happened?"
"Well, its was our 18th birthday party and you were shot up. And been in acoma for 5 months."
"Where's Ray?"
"Well, that good for nothing bastard hasn't been here since the accident. He needed 'air'."
"Wow, can you tell the doctor Im ready to leave."
"Yea sure.."
3hrs later.
After I got released I headed home to shower because I wreeked. Now I was on my way to Bianca's house.
I knocked on the door. "Coming!!" She said. She opened the door and froze. "Bree?!" She hugged me.
"Hey boo, can I come in?"
"Yea sure!"
I walked in. We caught up until I popped the question. "Where's Ray?"
"He moved out a month ago because he's 21 now."
"If you don't mind can I have his address?" She gave it to me. I thanked her and rushed to his house. I knocked on the door.
"Coming." His voice got deeper. He opened up the door and his face froze like Bianca. "Your alive??"
"Yeaa! How come you didn't visit me asshole!"
"Babe, you want spagetti to night?!" A female voice yelled. I looked behind him trying to see but he blocked.
"Bree, It's best you leave.." He said slowly closing the door. My heart shattered.
Ray p.o.v
When she showed up I felt bad.. I basically moved on. Well not all the way. I was happy to see her but my girlfriend brung me to reality.
I figured I may have been in love but I needed proof. Yes, I may love Bree'ann. I just can't come to believe it myself.
I walked in the kitchen. "Yea, spagetti is fine babe." I wrapped my hands around her.
"Who was that."
"Oh, this girl thought some dude named Freddy." I lied.
"Oh, okay. Mind fixing the bread?"
"Sure." Oh and by the way.. Craig figured it was a F&D and cussed me out.
Was I mad? Nahh.. I could careless about his little bitching. I'm grown.
Omniscient p.o.v
"Boss, Bree isn't dead" My worker said.
"That's fine. She's just another fuck and duck like my poor sister. I want his new girl dead."
"Okay, sir, one thing I have a question."
"Yes?"
"Don't you find it weird that Ray fucked his relative? "
"I do, but they didn't know. Well my sister does now but Ray won't. Probally never will.
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Okay, any takers for Ray's girl??
Ray fucked his relative? Grosssss....
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Ready For love
FanficBree and her Best friend Bianca lives in the ghetto parts of Florida, they are barely making it. Bree's twin Craig doesn't know that they strip. Ray, comes along and trys to change. Can he?