Score: 69/100
Summery: A boy named Andrew hears something breaking in, a monster that's been stalking him for days has finally broken in, and Andrew is ready to defend himself
Review: This is a perfect urban legend story that would fit right around the campfire, it's short and gives a good amount of thrill and terror. It keeps the gore level to a minimum and does it in a frightening way. There were a few spelling mistakes but it didn't distract from the rest of the story. But story should've told us a bit more, it seems to go by too quickly with any tension, only when Andrew is about to attack the creature which goes on. I would have been fine with a longer story, at least so it could build up something and the pay-off could be absolutely terrifying. Plus Andrew's character isn't really exploited much, I guess its so it can have more of a mysterious vibe to it.
Recommend?
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BOB is a great campfire story that's gross, has a creepy creature, and it's a short tale to be remembered.
Remember all credit goes to the author.
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