Hi guys! I've let this fic lay dormant for a while but the itch is back.
I'm posting a quick note because I'm going to reread and rewrite portions of this book before continuing.
I don't plan on changing major plot events, more cleaning up redundancies, characterization, sharpening the exposition to fall in line with my updated writing style.
I'm also going to heat up a lot of the Falstarion scenes, give them more bite, etc. Idk why I was too scared to the first time around, but live and learn!
I won't be taking it down while I do this, so this might result in notifications.
I also wanted to give the opportunity to anyone curious or wanting to reread a marker of what I have and haven't done.
I'll be updating this list as I go. Once I'm back to main updates, this author's note will be removed and replaced with the remainder of the story, which I might choose to release one it's completed or continue with staggered updates.
I'd also appreciate any thoughts or suggestions from readers that might apply to the rewrite, future updates, or the like.
Thank you for anyone still interested in this fic!
Chapters:
Prologue (No changes)
Chapter One (Original word count: 3261; Rewrite word count: 3141)
Chapter Two (Original word count: 3362; Rewrite word count: 2945)
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven
Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen
Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen
Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Twenty
Chapter Twenty-One
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THE DANSE MACABRE || astarion
Fanfictioncome with me, wretch, who are weighed down. / © girldirt [CURRENTLY REWRITING] astarion x fem!oc raphael x fem!oc gale of waterdeep x fem!oc oc x oc canon divergent based on the 'pale elf' questline started september 12th 2023
