The Wyrda of Alagaesia

The alternate ending.

This is just after Eragon and the others defeated the remaining 11 foes, and Galbatorix has emerged from Helgrind to see the battle feild. this is just the draft, so it is not perfect and im not doing any editing on this one, so lay off it will you? plz? alright, this is the non- hollywood version, so enjoy

As Galbatorix emerged with the other 10 riders and 3 razac, he saw that hi force had been crushed. none remained alive, but the riders had sustained heavy causalties. many lay dead on the ground, and others morning the losses of their soul-partners. but there was Eragon, standing smug as ever, looking confident. standing over the corpse of his freimd, one of the original forsworn.blood still leaked from his body. this sight made him angry, gaining his friend back only to lose them all to soon.

Eragon looked around him. Arya had sustianed many cuts, two others were dead, Kathyrn was bleeding out dast. He himself had recived very mior wounds, so when Galbatorix retreaded, Eragom followed. as did Omoris, Brom, John, Eragon, Blohdgarm, and many of the others who were not wounded. a few stayed behind to heal the wounded. before he left, Eragon said to Arya "I must go, but i will come back for you. and when i do, we will go wherever you wish. Vreal or Eragon can take over. they're certainly more quilified. but i will come back for you, and i will love you to the end of time." then he leaned into her lips for a long, sweet kiss. and then sphira took off.

the Forsworn began to cast spells back at the Riders. The Riders returned fire. no one got anywhere, as they doged the fire balls and lighting bolts. then Eragon, the original, came up with a great idea."If we could figure out who was casting a spell, could we use one of the twelve words to kill them?"

(a/n: it is important that they know who is casting the spell because when they feel they are being targeted, they would also kill their attacker with one of the 12 words. however, if they are already casting one, they would have to finish their spell, then figure out their attacker, then retaliate, at which point they would be dead.)

"We could, but then the Forsworn would know, and do the same." Replied Brom

"What if we made it look like they were hit from a bolt or ball?" Asked Vreal

"That would work." Asnswered Brom. So they set out to do so. alough it was difficult, the did manage to take down three: two Forsworn, one razac. then the forsworn landed in a place where the riders were forced to because of the limited room. with just over 20,000 Riders, it would be an extremly easy fight. against eleven. But from behind the forsworn came tens of thousands of what looked like dragons. but they were not dragons. they were laberthaka (did i spell that even close to right?) and razac. "Hold your groud men, the Forsworn are a much tougher fight than the razac! they out number us yes, but we out skill them in every way. whatever you do, dont look into their eyes. they cannot use magic, so have your fun on them. they are slower than the slowest, drunkest elf. those remaining 9 riders are all we have to worry about. stand with me, and at dawn tomarrow, the Riders of Alagasia will be the ones standing! Dragons! attack the Laberthaka. stand together and none of you shall fall. R%iders! 5,000 behind both Eragons, the rest behind Vreal! For honor! For Glory! For Freedom! For, Alagasia!!!!!" And then the razac were there. Eragon (New) went right while the other went left. Vreal took his striat down the center. Eragon light Brisingr alight and started to hack his way through the razac, who were obviosly not used to bing in large groups, let alone and army. He did this until he felt his strength failing, then he replienisehed himself wirth the energy inside the safire in his sword, and started to cast fire balls into the crowd of razac. it was very affective. he killed hundreds with that tactick, then when his strenght started to fail, he replenished himself, and went back ind with his sword. still, there were many, many razac. at one time, before the men and elves came there must have been of hundreds at one time. some how, eragon got farther in the mob. now he was surrounded by razac.  quickly, he tried to make his way back ward, but it way too late. his wards already worn out, he felt the blade coming behind him, swooping down at his neck, he tried to turn, but he wouldnt be able to in time. so he accepted his fate and didnt move. letting the blade come towards him. but then something unexpected happened. a green blade cut aoff the razac's hands, and the blade flew upward. then someone caught it and thrust it down the razac's throught, and landed behind eragon. "Arya." he said

"Eragon." she replied. and then they fought together. the battle lasted deep into the night. At dawn, the razac had lost most of their numbers. fewer than one hundred remained. three of the eleven forsworn lived. more than six thousand of the riders died. (The reason for this is the razac were barly armed. they didnot have all the swords in illeria to arm thier soldiers, therefor they had what they fount. some only had butter knives of screwdrivers.(see what i did there? no? im the only whovian here? oh, ok.).': the riders all had riders blades and therefore slaughtered the razac. them coming was only to intimidate, but it didnt work thanks to brom. also the riders had magic) with the light at the riders backs, they began to cut down the remaing razac. as they killed the last of the razac, the three riders grouped together. as they were mercalicy pounded with spells and disolved, a preasance krept up behind arya and eragon. as he spun his sword around, arya cried out in pain Eragon sliced an invisible forsworn in half. eragon caught arya to discover she had been stabbed through stomach. but blood also matted her head, and it was spreading. fast. he looked down to see the sword hasd slashed him across the chest. he layed down, blood gushing from each if their woumds. "Era...go..n" Arya said through coughs of blood.

"Yes?"

"I should have told you that... that.. i love..d you... so.. much sooner..."

"Its ok, at least... at least we had... our time together..."

"You will alwa...ys be my... love..."

"And you... mine"

"I... I... Love...."

"Arya, Arya... Arya please! Arya, Please come back to me." He got to his knees, but she was gone. then, whith an angry shout, he drew every ounce of energy he could find and mended her wounds, and then, he cast a spell to bring her back to life. it used everything he had left. every bit of strenght he had. he knew it would. but he didnt care. all that mattered was that she lived. and she did. she woke up, and they had a few seconds before eragon passed, in which he said "You... owe... me... Now go, and never look back, never regret, and never surrender. fight for me..." And eragon passed. and then a great roar went up from the south. Saphira came, and she saw Arya holding Eragons limp body while shouting into the heveans. She landed and looked into Arya's wet eyes. Arya looked into hers. Then Saphira looked down at Eragon. her eyes went wild, she took off into the heavens as far as she could go, ad let herself fall. the emptyness was to much for her.a crater remaind along with a crumbled blue dragon. And Saphira and Eragon, the saviors of Alagesia, were no more.

                                                                                   The End.

So, before you try to back seat edit the shit out of this, know this: i did not do anything to edit or sand the edges off of this cuz its an alternate ending that i drafted long ago. my normal writing routine is something like this: first 2 paper drafts in which the cpater is devolped. rthen i type it up. the next day, i see what doent make sense, and make it make sense. the day after that, i proof read and spell check. the last day i do punctuation. then the authors note and then, only then do i post. (Ihave multiple chapters at one time.) you want to know how much of that i did for this ending? I took my paper draft, typed it, put the authors not in here, posted. thats it. k? keep in mind this is the sad ending, thats why its shity. peace out! 

p.s.- epilouge coming soon for original ending. there will be no epilouge for this one. alright, Bye!