Hey. So how's it going? I know that I haven't updated in like what a mouth and a half to two mouths. I am so sorry but I do have an excuse. The first four weeks after I post the first chapter of nightmare I couldn't write because I was camping. It was hard to concentrate, there was so much to do and even if I could write I couldn't post anything because I didn't have any WIFI or cell service. Then after I went camping I was busy writing this chapter but I decide that I wanted to rewrite this chapter four time. On the bright side this chapter is almost 7,000 words. Thanks to all the people that decide to stay with me. Wow this is a long author notes sorry about that, now on to the chapter.
*Also a little warning there will be a little mature scene, a little half way through the chapter, so be carful.*
Al walked out of the train car and was about to open the door that lead into the next car when he stopped. Al hadn't come up with a plan to lure Max up to the roof. Al knew that Max could outrun him and that Max was stronger than him. Al knew that Jackson and Max both knew vampire alchemy. Al didn't know a lot about it. What's it like regular alchemy just for vampires or was it different. Al took some time to think about a plan. It took a little bit of time before Al came up with a plan. Knowing what he was going to do, Al opens the car door.
Al stepped into the car to see all the passengers were calmly sitting in their seats. The passengers were like dolls. Their eyes stared lifelessly ahead. Their eye's show no emotion, no life and no will to live. Their faces were like paintings. They held no life or expression. Al had never seen anything like this and it frightened him. People are not supposed to look like dolls they were supposed to look cheerful and carefree. Al didn't know how one could take all that away and leave the person looking like a lifeless shell. In the back of the car by one of the seats there was a flicker of movement. Al looked over there hoping that one of the passengers had moved, but the hope quickly died when Al spotted Max. He was kneeling on the ground next to the family of four.
On one of the benches there was the father. He was sitting beside the window. The father looked to be in his 40s. He had short brown hair. He was wearing a light gray button up shirt with dark blue pants. Besides the father was a 10-year-old girl. She had her blond hair in pigtails and her hair came down to her chin. She had a light pink dress on. On the other bench was the mother. She was also sitting beside the window. She looked to be in her late 30s. She had a purple dress with a white sweater. Her light hazel, hair was in a low bun. Beside her was a five-year-old boy. The boy had short brown hair. He was wearing a dark green T-shirt and light blue jeans.
Max was talking in a low whisper. Al couldn't hear anything that Max was saying. If Max was anything like Jackson, then he would be asking questions about Ed. Every once in a while the parents would nod or shake their heads. Al realized that Max was the reason that all of the passengers were like this. Max had turned them into his own personal slaves. They had to do whatever Max told them to do and they had to answer all the questions that Max had no matter what. It's sickened Al that Max has done this to all these people, but that's not the only thing Jackson and Max have to go through all of the train cars looking for Ed. They had to do this to every passenger on the train and what if they didn't find Ed on the train, and then they would have to do it all over again on another train. Max hasn't noticed that Al was in the car. He was too busy with asking questions and getting information.
"What do you want with my brother"? Al asked with anger.
He saw Max jump a little after hearing the question. Max looked at Al. His face showed some surprise, but it quickly vanished. Max now had a stern expression. He slowly got up off the ground and turned so that he was now facing Al.
"Does that mean that your brother's name is Ed"? Max asked with a hint of curiosity.
Al only nodded.
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Nightmare
Fanfiction- Sequel to Fullmetal vampire- Michael, a vampire, who is after Edward and will stop at nothing to have what he wants. He hides just out of sight, pulling the strings to all of his puppets. He is the most fear vampire and he someone you don't want...
