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* So I got 3 entries this time * happy dance * and the entries were so good it was really hard to choose 1, 2nd and 3rd. If I could make everyone first I would but I cant, rules are rules. Here are the results :P *

In 3rd place is..

darrenthewriter, Loved the sudden turn in the story line and the mystery of what that creature was, to this day I am baffled about what he was. I thought maybe a rat or a fly, not a mosquitoe because they live in heat! To improve maybe add a bit more detail at the ending but other than that amazing! Congratulations and I hope to see more of your writing in the future. :P

In 2nd place is.. 

This was so hard to choose but over all I chose in 2nd...

Nivz92, your entry was very interseting! It was well constructed and very engaging. I loved the cliff hanger at the end to! Just what your tense sometimes Such as: She had asked instead because it was talking in the past. But other than that a very engaging and intereting read! It would be awesome if you wrote a story with that in! I think people would love it. I hope that you enter more in the future :)

Finally In 1st place is..

ColinHexr, your entry was absurd but intriguing. I loved the description at the beginning and when the action started. I could totally relate to the charcater at the beginning and then i was confused but intrigued. It left me curious and want to read me. I hope you will enter in the future and well done.


* Well done to all of you! Please PM regarding your rewards! Hi! This competition seemed to have brought up many absurd subjects and i like it! The originality you guys have come up with is great :P Remember you all get rewards because you came 1st, 2nd and 3rd :P *

* Also competition #4 has had no entries.. If you could enter that would be great. I can extend the date if you comment below you will enter \/ Thanks :) *

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